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rosalinda316

bfkul novice plot deny

Jul 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hello rosalinda316 here, I'll be reviewing your plot today.
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  3. Terrain: Like coren said, your terrain is good but it could flow better. Right now it looks a bit like the layers of a cake. IE similar in style but not flowing together.
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  5. Structure: Your houses could be a bit more matched theme wise. You should also add more (larger) structures because there are empty spaces on your plot.
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  7. Organics: Your tree trunks and branches are good, the leaves seem to be giving you trouble though. Watch plutouthere on youtube for tutorial help.
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  9. Good luck on your next submission!
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