SSS Jabberwocky Dōjin, proofed, now with extra atogaki!

SlapStickStrike's (Stealth Changing Line) Let Me Introduce My MonsterGirlFriend! - Compilation ed(?)
AKA: Jabberwocky dōjin
Trnsltn: Eyepop
Everything else: Fill in your own names if you help, hey?

Page 1
MC: "hn..."

"Mm?"

"Where am I...?"

"UWAH!"

CheshireCat: "Pretty good instincts there, humyan"


P2
[Shit, monsters!]

[I'm gunna get eaten

[First off, I've gotta get away—]

*BREASTLY BOINGING*

JabberWock: "You, you're a Visitor huh— What a thing to find!"

"Today must be that celebrated day,"

"Since I met a human!
Just kidding<3"


P3
JW: "Well then; please be seated on the bed"

MC: "The bed? As if you'd have something like tha..."

*BED INTENSIFIES*

JW: "By the by, when is your birthday?"

MC: "Eh... well, it's the Circle of the Xth."
[Why's there a bed in the middle of the forest?]

JW: "Mhmm,
In other words, for the time being, that thing from before's the reason,"

MC: ??

JW: "Don't worry now,
You and I, together, we'll have a celebration! That's all I want"

MC: "Wha, What exactly do you mean b—UWAH!"

JW: "Is this tentacle that scary?

"But these little ones are really quite good at licking you know?"

"You certain you don't want a try?"


P4

MC "Ye- Yeah."

JW: "Good boy<3"

MC: "Uaaaaoh!"

[They've made the inside of my pantsu* all slimy, they're making sloppy noises...
[Its almost like they're loaches* writhing around!]
*Yes, this is what it says.

JW: "Well, how's that?"

"The inside of this cloth's become pretty crazy right? <3"


P5

JW: "Looook<3"

[Uwah...
My cock and those tongues are all knotted together...]

JW: "Fufu...
"Now then, I'll make you feel even better"


P6

[This view is incredible...]

[It's almost like some kind of mad struggle]

[Her tongues are swarming around my cock<3]


P7

[Her tongues are eating me up
[I'm going to be eaten up whole<3]


P8

JW: "Your Spirit Energy's quite high quality you know?"
"And so's your O face."

"In fact, it's exactly to my taste<3"

"Hey!
Why don't you become mine huh?"

MC: "Ah... Eh...?"

JW: "You- you don't want to?"

MC: "That's not it"

[She can be this cute?]

"If you're fine with me, I will"


P9

[So what if she's a mons—HYA!

JW: "YEEES!"

"Well then,"

"Since you're now mine, I'll have to provide proof of ownership!"


P10

JW: "I've been wanting this for a long time now<3"

"How is it?
"Do you feel like you're getting eaten up?"

[Amazing
It's like her vagina has a mind of its own!]
[Its roiling, like it's trying to wring me out!]


P11

JW: "And if I do this, isn't it like I'm grinding on your glans?"

"And now rubbing your frenulum!"

"I'll lick every single one of those places that you enjoy so much!"

"Your weak point is..."

"HERE<3"


P12

JW: "Bullseye<3"

"I absolutely love that face you make when you cum<3"

[As soon as she attacks that spot, I can't help it, I'm forced to cum]

JW: "Holding back, y'know..."

"You're not allowed to do that<3"


P13

*MC'S ORGASM GRUNT*

JW: "Aha~<3
"I can't get enough of this...
"Your Spirit Energy..."

"Every time you cum in my pussy, the flavour changes! <3"


P14

JW: "How about this time, you'll make love to me? <3"

"That's it!
Your cock's so good! It's almost like I'll die!"

[Every time I thrust, I can feel my thoughts melting away,
[this is too crazy,
It's like I'm drowning<3]

JW: "It's all too much,
"I've totally fallen so, so in love with you now <3"

[I think I'll drown under this wave of pleasure <3]


P15

MC: "Me- Me too"

JW: "Are you serious!?"
"Even if you're lying, I'm never ever gunna let you go now!"

[Aah-
[Her cervix keeps sucking at me<3]

[I feel like pouring everything in there<3]

[I'm going to dye every nook and cranny of her womb white with my semen <3]

JW: "Just like that! <3"

"Right now it's the same between us,"

"You belong to me,"

"And now I belong to you too <3"


P16

*THE AUDITORY PLEASURE OF BEING CUMMED INSIDE OF*

JW: "You've totally...
"Marked me now <3"

MC: "Yeah... -ah,"
"By the way, what were you celebrating today?"

JW: "What's this?
"You really don't know?"


P17

JW: "Today's both your and my Unbirthday,* right?"

MC: "Unbirthday?"

JW: "That's right, you only have your birthday once a year, right? So your Unbirthday is celebrated for the other 364 days in the year!"

"So. That. Means.
"Today, and tomorrow, and the day after that too,"

"We'll definitely have to "celebrate" a lot!"

THE END.


*TransNote: It written as "ハッピーアンバースデー" but is read, "no reason at all day", and is called that from this point onwards, if you were curious.



Omake 1 - General Wonderland Points

[My girlfriend's a Jabberwocky]

[A type of dragon from Wonderland]

MC: "To begin with, how did I even end up here?"

JB: "Well, Wonderland is a pretty unique world y'know?"

"If you were to peel off a little bit of reality, you'd be able to reach it,"
"Those who lose their way in a deep forest,"

"Those lead astray searching for old, forgotten things,"

"And of course, there are many like you who lose the way out of their dreams!"

MC: "EH!?
"IT WAS ALL A DREAM!?"
(BIGGIE!)


Omake 2 - Tiny Door

JW: "You're completely correct! But mistaken!"

"Have a look!"

MC: "Huh, I can see myself sleeping!"

JW: "And now we do THIS!"

*ZELDA OBJECT GET JINGLE*


Omake 3 - Welcome to Wonderland!

JW: "Morning!"

MC: "This is-
"My bedroom...

"It was all a dream, (BIGGIE!!!)
"But it wasn't a dream at all"

JW: "I synchronised our worlds with this Golden Key, so I could follow you"
"Now then,"

"I'm just asking to confirm, but... that is, with me..."

"Would you like to sleep with me once more?"

[There can be only one possible answer to that question, right?]

THE END! - Jabberwocky too cute!


Jabberwock Setting and Explanation:

Dragon Family Monster
Even though they're members of the Dragon species of monsters; Jabberwock can only be found in Wonderland, and even there they're still rare creatures.

Like many other Dragon species monsters, Jabberwock possess strong, durable armour on both their arms and their legs that can easily fend off enemy attacks.
As befitting of their Dragon heritage, Jabberwock possess incredible strength; a human couldn't possibly withstand their power.
In regards to Wonderland itself, to begin with, it's actually a collection of unique demon realms with no real connection to one another. That said, the means of entering one realm from another are quite limited so the opportunities for internecine conflict in Wonderland are vanishingly rare.
Thus the energy that would otherwise be expended in conflict is primarily routed towards mating, i.e: used up hunting for a human partner to mate with.
It is said that Jabberwocky have something of a "hugging habit," when they get too emotionally worked up, they'll end up instinctively clinging to their mate.
The Jabberwocky are generally 30-50cm taller than the average human, and when these strong girls hug you close, one risks falling in to the delusion that you're being lovingly wrapped up by them.
Furthermore, due to that difference in height, the head height of the average human being is perfectly level with the Jabberwock's chest.
Whilst this isn't specifically limited to Jabberwocky, even so, their cleavage is a particularly strong source of pheromones; men whom are wrapped up by these girls, often find themselves falling prey to the Jabberwock's dangerous embrace.

The Jabberwocky have several features in common with their Dragon kin, such as wings and a tail; however they also possess unique tentacle-like appendages that end in mouths, with both teeth and tongue.*
They're only pseudo-mouths however, their only true function is to lovingly caress their owner's partner.
The Jabberwocky symbol amongst monster-kind is the mouth; and it said that if you are licked, it's a true display of affection.
Furthermore, one of the things most "to their taste" is to use their mouths (pseudo-mouths included,) in the throes of passion; teasingly licking you, always as if it were their first time, they happily suck you in.**

Every Jabberwock can have a heart carved upon her soul by a specific person.
This is more than simple mating with her partner; alike to being marked, It's proof that "the partner who loves her so much" reflects her own destiny truly, and it's a sign the Jabberwocky hold very, very dear.
It would be no understatement to suggest that every positive and negative feature of their partners is calculated with this destiny, and that the Jabberwocky measure their happiness by comparing the heart carved within them by their partner and their destiny.

Returning to Wonderland; it is a separate existence to that of your usual demon realms.
For the monsters whom live there, there is but a single way to access the outside world: they must use "the Golden Key," and "the Tiny Door."

The Tiny Door is a tiny magical window, through which you can scry a different world. If there's a specific world you wish to see, you must have a suitable medium that can ensure a connection between your world and its own.
If you can successfully establish the connection between your two worlds with the Tiny Door, you can then use the Golden Key to pass from one world to another.
The Golden Key is the artefact that both fixes, and expands the Tiny Door, thus allowing you to properly access it either way.


*TransNote: Yeah. Ok. Technically I've played around with this a little bit. In the original, they've made a specific name for these aforementioned tentacles, as distinct from, y'know, tentacle-tentacles.
In the Japanese the Jabberwock's tentacles are called "触頭", whereas a normal tentacle is "触手"; this is a bit of a cute pun. The normal kanji for tentacle is a conjunction of the kanji for "to touch" and "hand", whereas the name for the Jabberwock's tentacles is a conjunction of "to touch" and "head". You get why this is impossible to translate right? At any rate, I'm not sure of the reading for "触頭"; that ever reliable authority Google Translate wants to say "furekashira", whereas another (rather more literal) translation says "sawa'atama".
To muddy the waters one final time, the combination "触頭" already exists as "furegashira", the name for a liaison temple between the military government and a religious sect at certain points in Japanese history. One would assume there's no connection.
If you were wondering, the reading for "触手" is "shokushu".

**a series of painful puns: 1st one said "to lick thoroughly," written as a conjunction of "to lick" and "to tease;"
2nd sounds like "as if for the first time," written as "to rub or to tease;"
3rd and final sounds like "sucks you down," but written as "gladly/happily/welcomingly sucks you."


Author's Afterward

For being so kind as to pick up tips book, I thank you sincerely,
Stealth Changing Line here.

Thanks to everyone's continued support, EX has managed to become a compilation.
This time around I picked something out of Kurobinega-sama's monmusu encyclopaedia.
I've been working my way through  it with EX1~EX3+. (?)
The encyclopaedia is totally filled with cute monster girls, front cover to back!
It's almost like he's got a never ending reservoir of new characters, he presses a button and out pops a new one...!

It's been two years since I wrote EX1, it's been so long that it almost feels like an age has come and gone.
My drawing abilities really increased! Or so I'd like to say!

I've always really loved the Alice in Wonderland DiOOey movie, and I've long thought I should draw something from it.
And then there was Jabberwocky's lewd tongue, the nice slippery feeling was really seductive; the design she got was superb.
So this time I knew I had to have a "pantsu overrun" scene put in there somewhere; it was something that was included early on in this book's concept stage since I wanted to draw that situation so much (lol).
I was quite worried about which direction to go in for the full-length lips (?)
Having your whole body licked would be pretty nice I bet...

This was the first time I tried a tanned skin character, and I had a really tough battle with it.
But the highlights were easy and fun to do on the other hand.
If I ever get the chance to redraw any of this, I'd like to make it all a lot cleaner and prettier...

Well then that's all, see ya, which ever book you next pick up is when we'll meet again!
2016/4/20 Stealth Changing Line


Translator's Comment!

G'day, Eyepop here,
This is pretty nostalgic! Not the Jabberwocky, rather a StealthChangingLine dōjin; I remember being at Comiket back in the Summer of '14 actually buying the first one of this series, the Sandworm. (I wish I had said something to StealthChangingLine, beyond an awkward thank you for the dōjin; ごめん！)
And that Sandworm dōjin was the first one I ever translated too! I apologise sincerely if I minced it. And also if I minced this one too.
But here we are, 2 and a half years on from Sandworm, and I'd like to hope I've improved since then, certainly it took a lot more than the 24 hours I spent translating Jabberwock...
And what a Jabberwock she is! Honestly, I'm pretty lukewarm on KC's lore, and lukewarm on most of the Wonderland girls (Jubjub a soft QT, Cheshires are overdone, Humpty Eggs must be Erased) but over the course of this dōjin I really started to like SSS' Jabberwock. Consider me a convert if they're all as cute as this one.
And if their saliva doesn't end up chaffing.
And their mouth-tentacles become less terrifying.

Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed it!
Eyepop & staff.

PS. The atogaki snuck up on me a little after midnight on the day I thought I had finished it all (it was hiding in the Chinese scans of all places,) and since our lovely Guest-anon was hard at work cleaning up said Chinese scans and typesetting, I had to knock it out quickly: so I've given it a rough and ready, super quick translation. It's as rough as guts, but you can get the gist and Stealth's general tone.
He seems like a nice guy, I reckon he did great for the first time he's done a brown chara! Buy his work if you get the chance! Go out of your way to do it even!
とても上手になったよ！
大好き〜