[Feedback for suzy8][F4M]Let Me Be Her Replacement

Let Me Be Her Replacement by suzy88

I have made some slight grammatical edits, and thrown in a few extra sentences to try and flesh it out, but kept things mostly the same.

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Hey... Thank you for letting me in your room. I know I should’ve told you I was coming over, but there's something I really need to say to you. I noticed that you and Lisa haven't been hanging out together much recently. I know you two seemed really close, and I was worried about you, so I asked around, and everybody said that you confessed to her that you had feelings for her and got rejected.

[pause] Uhmm.. are you doing okay? I know that the three of us were really close and I guess I'm just sad that lately we haven’t even really talked to each other...

[Saying quicky] Wait. No. Stop. Please don't tell me to go... It hurts me to see you like this... All closed off and rejecting everyone around you. Please... Just... Please let me in. Don't push me away... [Sigh] You know... I never thought I would say this but... I love you. I know this is not the right time to say it... I never thought I would say it myself... I am content watching you and Lisa dance around each other and although it hurts, as your best friend I can take it. Or I thought I could... Is it bad, that a part of me is happy because now you are free to love someone else? A part of me hopes that it will be me, who can ease your pain and heartache and make you a happy man again... Ssshh, please don't say anything. And please, don't think about anything... Just give me a chance. Give me a chance to prove myself, give me a chance to convince you, that I am right for you.

[Sound of clothes being taken off] Look at me. Please look at my naked body, all bare and open for you. My full, soft, round breast all ripe and standing proud.. my tiny rosy nipples perked up by the chilly air in your room... Imagine how it would feel to cup my beautiful breasts in your hands, and gently caress my nipples with your fingers. You’d like that, wouldn’t you? Let your eyes wander further down and look at the flat plane of my belly... the curves of my hips... my soft thighs... and <pause> what’s nestled between them, my sweet, lovely, bare pussy... Fix your eyes on my body... Take it all in – every last inch of it. See the way my hands squeeze my soft breasts oh so slowly and enticingly. You know you want to touch them too. You want to run your tongue over my nipples and press them into your mouth. To suck on them like you are dying of thirst. And I will let you. I want you so badly. I will let you do anything to me. Anything. Tonight, I am yours and no-one elses. I can be anything you want. You could make love to me, like I’m the only girl in the world that matters. Or you can fuck me hard and rough to vent your frustration. I am okay with that. I can see the pain in your eyes. I know Lisa hurt you. Fuck me. Use me. I am yours. So come here, and use me as you like. Tonight, let me be her replacement.

[Moans] Mmmyes, that’s it. Grab my breasts roughly... and suck on my nipples just like that... [Moans] It feels so good... I can feel myself getting wet... [Moans] Stop, stop... Come, let’s get on the bed. Tonight is about you. I want to suck your cock. [Zipper sound] Your cock... I can't believe I have the chance to hold it in my hand... and taste it in my mouth [Moans, sucking sound] You taste so good... This is better than I ever imagined it to be [Sucking sound] Your cock is getting bigger inside my mouth... and dripping salty, delicious precum on my tongue... I want more... So much more. I want to taste your cum... [Moans, sucking frantically] Unghh, but we can't... For our first time together, I want you to come inside my pussy... So let me lay down on your sheets. Let me lay here ready for you to have your way with me. Please... fuck me.... Please, don’t make me beg. I’ve dreamed of this so many times... Please grant my wish and make me yours. Fuck me, nice and hard. I want to feel it. I want to feel your cock in my pussy days afterwards... Make my pussy remember the shape of your cock... Fuck me...

[Moans as entered, you can improvise as you like] Oh yes, you are inside of me... Ah, your cock is so hard and fills me up completely. Fuck me... Fuck me now... I want it... I want it harder, faster... and I want it now... [Moans] Oh yes... ohh yess... Fuck me just like that.. Uh huh... You are so deep inside me... I can feel my pussy wrap around your cock... It feels so, so good... I am so fucking wet... Yeah, keep thrusting your hips like that... Keep hitting that spot... Oh my pussy feels so good... You are making me feel so good... I am melting... My pussy is so hot it feels like my insides are just melting away... Fuck me harder... harder... yeah... I want it... I want your cum... I want you to cum inside my pussy... I want to have your babies... Come on fill me up with your cum... Fill my womb with your seed...Don’t stop now. Cum for me. Make me pregnant with your babies... [Moans until orgasm]

[Catch your breath] That was intense... Thank you, for making love to me. I know you haven't exactly accepted my feelings for you but my feelings are genuine and only for you so... I can wait. No, I will wait. So... please consider it. I hope I have convinced you tonight, that I am the only girl in the world for you. I will wait as long as it takes for you to love me back. I do mean what I say you know... I want us to someday live happily as a family, with our children.