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- Nineage - Today at 6:31 PM
- feint should be in the first sentence
- basically how this works is
- im gonna give you changes
- and you should make them as i give them
- and when they are all done
- ill check it over
- Gummy - Today at 6:32 PM
- got it
- Nineage - Today at 6:32 PM
- and give 3/3
- you should then ofc remove the feint sentence
- and combine that info into the first sentence
- and in the last slot explain why aipom is better (access to more powerful stab and the bulk)
- you should explain the actual advantage of a powerful fake out in its point in moves
- (hits first and takes a turn from the opp)
- which makes it being powerful more helpful
- mention that feint doesnt have the flinch that fo has
- Water Pulse is an incredibly important move, breaking the Sturdies of and KOing Dwebble and Onix.
- can you explain
- what you mean by this
- Gummy - Today at 6:39 PM
- wow i worded that one badly
- fake out breaks the sturdy of onix and dwebble
- Nineage - Today at 6:39 PM
- i think you mean
- it kos them
- Gummy - Today at 6:39 PM
- and wpulse beats them
- unless theyre weak armor
- Nineage - Today at 6:40 PM
- after sturdy is broken
- right
- Gummy - Today at 6:40 PM
- yeah
- Nineage - Today at 6:40 PM
- ok
- i dont like the phrase full potential
- in set details
- since you dont specify full potential to do what
- Gummy - Today at 6:41 PM
- well i mean
- thats its max speed
- Nineage - Today at 6:41 PM
- id say
- max speed then
- its just more clear
- Gummy - Today at 6:41 PM
- kk
- Nineage - Today at 6:41 PM
- but make sure still to give the actual value of 19
- its a personal preference thing but
- since ivs dont show up
- on analyses
- i like to put the iv lowering as the first sentence in set details
- so people know to do it
- ill leave that change up to you
- Gummy - Today at 6:43 PM
- yeah i kept meaning to change the iv thing
- Nineage - Today at 6:43 PM
- your usage tips are quite sparse
- heres what i would add:
- meowth should be preserved to handle setup sweepers its team could not otherwise handle but that it can ko with the combo of fake out + feint
- something about scouting onix for weak armor / sturdy
- feint can be used in niche situations to hit through protect, such as against torchic and carvanha, so abuse this
- Gummy - Today at 6:47 PM
- all added :D
- Nineage - Today at 6:47 PM
- thats all i can think of
- it still seems sparse
- Gummy - Today at 6:47 PM
- i mean
- meowth is C+
- Nineage - Today at 6:47 PM
- yeah usually bad mons have more usage tips
- since they are harder to use
- ah well i guess
- Gummy - Today at 6:47 PM
- meowth is bad but its so simple
- just click fake out then feint
- Nineage - Today at 6:48 PM
- first point of team options
- Gummy - Today at 6:48 PM
- or corresponding coverage move
- Nineage - Today at 6:48 PM
- i would put that Meowth is best suited for hyper offensive teams that cannot deal with setup sweepers another way.
- improve my grammar
- explain why meowth likes bulky pivots bringing it in (frail as balls)
- Removing Choice Scarves also ensures Meowth can come in an revenge kill them
- i dislike this because most of what meowth is rking it rks with feint + fo
- so scarf is irrelevant
- id either specify this to certain pokemon that fo feint doesnt kill but a coverage move does
- or remove it
- include doduo in the list of mons that share checks
- since its probs the best meowth partner
- WTF IS NASTY PLOT ROUND
- THATS THE DONGEST SET
- Gummy - Today at 6:52 PM
- that was
- Nineage - Today at 6:52 PM
- IVE EVER HEARD
- Gummy - Today at 6:52 PM
- an actual set in xy
- Nineage - Today at 6:52 PM
- wait it has
- Gummy - Today at 6:52 PM
- that got a whole separate set and everything on the analysis
- Nineage - Today at 6:52 PM
- technician
- ok thats not awful
- i mean it is
- but its oo material
- Gummy - Today at 6:52 PM
- ive used it and its actually not THE worst thing on the entire planet
- skitty's worse.
- Nineage - Today at 6:53 PM
- im not sure i like faster pokemon
- being included in cc
- since most of the faster pokes
- get slammed by feint
- can you explain why thats there
- Gummy - Today at 6:53 PM
- diglett lives one and ohkoes though rite
- even scarf chinchou def can take one
- yeah diglett has to rkill
- Nineage - Today at 6:54 PM
- ok can u specify
- instead of saying
- they have to watch out
- say they take significant damage from feint
- in doing so
- then i think you are done so let me reread
- Meowth can also quickly scout whether or not the Onix is Weak Armor or Sturdy.
- Nineage - Today at 7:00 PM
- this isnt what i meant
- at all
- i meant you should scout to know whether fake out needs to be used to break sturdy, or whether it will just give a free speed boost
- Gummy - Today at 7:00 PM
- oh lel
- hows this
- However, try to scout whether or not the Onix is Weak Armor or Sturdy, as using Fake Out on the former is counterproductive.
- Nineage - Today at 7:02 PM
- say if possible, try to scout
- if u do that, you are good for 3/3
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