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- 5. now that you think about *it*.
- 13. and I've had such close calls* before
- 20. As soon as you* know what's inside that suitcase
- 33. Magic surrounds the bounty and *it* is promptly
- 37. Despite being about 3 times as *tall*
- 38. as she stares the same daggers that* humans *do* at you
- 53. what remains *covering* your shoulder smokes black
- 65. Did the ingots protect* you, even negligibly?
- 66. >You bump on the fence ...consider *bump into the fence* or *bump against the fence* what you wrote is technically correct, it just sounds off.
- 72. she gets up on all fours*
- 127. So why didn't she blow* a fuse then?
- 128. With a sigh, you pinch your glabella... I had to look up "glabella". Just saying.
- 143. The situation just*... confounds* you.
- 170. In a soft voice, with wide-opened eyes, you whisper, "The basement was not a basement... It was meant to be your workshop."
- I would break this into two lines, personally.
- >In a soft voice, with wide-opened eyes, you whisper
- "The basement was not a basement... It was meant to be your workshop."
- 189. >You grab the pillow case* and rummage, carefully,* inside of it.
- 190. >Oh, there was* 200$ in the wallet.
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