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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far but theres just a few things i think you could work on!
- Your terrain is good, but its a bit rough in some places so smooth it out just a tad.
- Your organics are a little hoopty with the stairs and everything, but idk, i kinda dig it! Add more organics in and around the plot though! Fill up all that empty space!
- Your structures are cool, but there for sure needs so be more added on to them, or more of them! Preferably both actually, but thats up to you to decide!
- Hope this helps!
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