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MidnightCxthy's Initiate Review

Jun 19th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. First of all, you have no terrain or organics. We prefer to have those two things on your plot, unless the structure is spectacular. But unfortunately, there is a lot to be improved with your structure.
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  5. Firstly, it's a little too large, and takes up too much of the plot. This would be okay if it had a large amount (or at least an appropriate use of) detailing and depth, but it doesn't. You have some detailing on the back and sides of the structure, but it's way too much of a checker pattern, and it feels like really unthoughtful detailing, as it's the same and extremely repetitive. The shape is pretty simple too and could be a lot more original.
  6. The interior is pretty empty as well.
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  8. I would highly recommend restarting your plot. Try and include all three of the following next time; Terrain, organics and structure, which shows a nice level of detailing on all three.
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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