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Tayter_Kat

GamerRanger

Aug 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello there GamerRanger, I am Tayter_Kat and this is your Novice review:
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to castles to market stalls. You have a great structure with some good depth! great job here!!! you have achieved the accurate level for Novice!
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees, animals, and even crops! You have some good organics, but I don't really understand why there are two different types of trees. I would keep them all in the same theme to make the plot look better. You can choose either tree you would like. Also, make sure the trees are not exactly similar. Trees in the forest resemble one another, but they are not an exact copy.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills, cliffs, and caves. You have some interesting terrain, but you have a lot of flat areas on your plot. I recommend fixing the flat areas to make them more interesting. You can do whatever you would like to them, just make sure it is not repetitive and flat. I would also add onto your arch; it is kind of random leaving like that. Try adding it smoothly instead of forcing it to be on the plot.
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything that does not fit into the above categories. You have a lot of empty spots on your plot. Try adding more trees, smaller structures, paths, interesting terrain, etc. This will add more to your plot and make it more unique.
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  12. Fix the thing mentioned above and your good to go! Good Luck<3
  13. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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