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  1. Proposing a Bikko manga
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  3. Facts: Bikko is around 19, 1 eye, 1 leg, uses a crutch, is a prostitute, plays guitar/possibly sings in a rock band (maybe punk?), she has a never-say-die spirit and is very sunny, generally happy about life itself. She dresses simplistically, either in boys clothes or girls clothes in a very punk fashion. HEAVY smoker, likes a drink, enjoys marijuana, possibly a high-school dropout, room is kind of a mess and has lots of posters and random shit she probably picked up for free. She has a number of black and white cats, and she has an older sister who likes to hang out and smoke with her. White hair with one black streak in it, which she is sort of proud of because it looks cool as hell.
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  5. Story's focus: The life of laid-back Bikko (that could even be the title!) The idea is that Bikko lives a simple life and makes the most of her time. Her life can be really hard because she has no depth perception and can't walk right, plus she's a whore. Because of her looks, she can't likely get all normal clients, so she's bound to have problems. However, even when she feels like she's going to crack in the hardship, she picks herself up and smiles.
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  7. timeline: -Bikko wakes up, wearing just her underwear. Getting up slowly, she immediately lights up a cigarette, and pats her cat on the head. she starts the day by getting dressed, and has a look at the clock and calendar: Sunday 1:30 PM (she had a late night). Remembering her plans for the day, she decides to head out early. -Bikko takes a walk around town, smoking and just smiling and taking in her surroundings. -At 4:00, she goes to her sister's house to hang out. At 4:20, they light up a joint and decide to just chill and talk (this is where most of the dialog will happen. Bikko talks about a show her band played the night before.) -Later on, Bikko is still a bit high since they smoked a lot. It's starting to get dark. She rechecks a text message that she is supposed to meet at a certain hotel at 6:30. She decides to go there and wait. -The guy shows up at 7:00. It's pretty clear that he's a bit of a creep - slightly overweight, shaking a little. Bikko doesn't flinch. They head inside, and Bikko basically tells him he can do whatever he wants, for (I don't know how much sounds reasonable, you guys can help me there). He starts with the foreplay, and is rough - he tears her shirt trying to pull it off dramatically. Bikko makes a bit of a face at her shirt getting ripped, but lets it go. As the guy starts licking her torso, he starts calling her vicious insults. He keep saying things like that, but she is still just smiling placidly, like she's heard it all before and it doesn't bother her. We see a very rough sex scene, but Bikko seems to more or less enjoy it. However, afterwad, the guy starts putting his pants on and walking away. Bikko asks about her money, and he says something along the lines of 'as if I'd give money to a fucking freak like you!' Bikko calls 'But!' but the man slams the door. -Bikko walks home, burning through cigs and walking briskly and agitated. When she gets home, she stands for a minute then she screams. She throws some things around in a rage, then sees her guitar. Picking it up, she wails out an aggressive and mighty solo. After doing so for several minutes, she calms down. She lights a cig and heads outside. She takes a short walk, looking at the sky, and breathing calmly. Heading back inside, she sits down on her bed. She pets her cats, lights another cig, and then finally returns to her old placid smile. She lays down for a bit, finishes her cig, and goes to sleep smiling. Bonus story? Because everyone wants to see Bikko get revenge, we can have a bonus story. Bikko will be wearing the tux she wears in a lot of the images of her. She finds the guy's house, and peeks in his window. The guy has a total otaku room, and is playing with his kitten VERY lovingly. When his mom calls him out of the room, Bikko sneaks in the window, and takes the cat. Then, looking around, she sees a dakimakura, and she puts out her cigarette on it. The next day, the man is crying about how he has lost his cat, while holding onto his very burnt daki. Page amounts? We have assumed that this will be about 50 pages long. Commission rates should probably be 4-5 bucks a page, meaning from 200-250 bucks. If it turns out no one works that cheap, then we may have to reduce the page count. Going on a 50-page plan: 1. Title page is also first image of Bikko in bed 2-4.5. Bikko waking up, getting dressed, petting cats, checking calendar. 4.5-6. Bikko walking around town, ending with checking watch to go to sister's house. 7-18. Bikko and sister chilling, smoking pot, and talking. 19-21. Bikko wandering (grabbing some food?) and then heading to love hotel to wait. 22. Guy shows up late. 23-38. From the beginning of sex scene to the man leaving and Bikko being left. 39. Bikko walks home hurriedly. 40-41. Tantrum before spotting guitar. 42-43. Intense guitar playing. 44. Bikko calms down a bit, has a smoke, goes outside. 45. Bikko calmly observing the night 46. Goes back inside, plays with cats, etc. 47. Finally goes to sleep with a smile 48. Explanation page of who bikko is and why we did this project 49-50. Bonus story, preferably in 4koma format.
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