Olivia Motley
BLEEP
BLEEP
February 12, 2016

•	Rhetorical Devices
o	Rhetorical Goal: Stephen King it.
o	Make it in a rather third person view, with the view set mostly from Ellie.
o	Repetition (His/Her name was ___)
o	Analogy. References to angels, demons, heaven, good.
o	Irony. The puncher.
o	Foils, contrasts, purposeful contradictions.
o	Morals? Do not judge a book by its cover. Karma, injustice.
o	Have it start happy, and get dark, darker, yet darker.

1.	First Section
o	Introduce the settings, the year (2132-2149)
o	Introduce the Batelle Orphanage, the main setting of the entire story.
o	Introduce Ellie, the "main character". Builder her as the main star we're dealing with, the normal.
o	Transition with a semi-cliffhanger, alluding to the future.

2.	Second Section
o	Start with an event.
o	Introduce Mary as a major character, but have her slowly slip back into the shadows,
o	Describe being sweet, innocent, yet abused.
o	Analogies, make tons of them. Analogies to religion, angels, the supernatural.
o	Describe the daily life, the food, and the classes.
o	Description, lots of chronological description.
o	Introduce David, a minor character later on in section.

3.	Third Section
o	Sad details, contrasting to happy details.
o	Depression, abuse, disorder.
o	Event happens. Reference that Mary has stood up, make her seem right
o	Kid leaves orphanage, describe it as a self-made choice, yet ominous.
o	Explain how that with the absence of the main bully, kids like Mary are happier.
o	Transition over a few more years, very few children are adopted, and Mary is back to her cheery self.

4.	Fourth Section
o	Add more creepy detail by this point, kids leaving without consent, and not coming back.
o	The truth about the sad and violent world the children (now mid/late teens) live in, snuffing out childhood innocence.
o	Describe the wars, the rebellions, with the fire in the streets.
o	Give an air of safety and defense to the Orphanage.
o	A feeling of safety and distance from the violence, but still close enough to linger worry.
o	Describe sleepless nights during the summer, as there is no proper Air Conditioning
o	Make transition at night, paint it hopefully, two old friends trying to patch up their friendship.

5.	Fifth Section
o	Lots of description, with a bit of dialogue. Small talk
o	Heavy description settings, moonlight bathing the rocks, the canyons.
o	The betrayal happens, describe the suddenness and longevity, use powerful words.
o	Describe grace through death, using contrasts, and allusions to the beginning.
o	End on a soft cliff-hanger, nobody knows exactly what happens to Mary after the incident.
o	Have the moral be revealed through re-reading and comprehension, the true deeper meanings of the narrative.

6.	End with the last repetition, slower.