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- Hey this is jewsef and ill be reviewing your plot.
- Alright so to start off your terrain is good, I like it, it has what's supposed to be needed. However, you need to fix your waterfall's bottom, the water is just randomly scattered and it's not looking good.
- For your structure, I recommend deleting what u have and start a new one. Usually for new builders I recommend following these easy steps for building a simple house:
- -Step 1: Do the outline of the building (house, tower, etc..)
- Example: http://gyazo.com/722eef1311518bf95f3f3f6de824b91e
- -Step 2: Search for a good block pallete and start filling in the house
- Example: http://gyazo.com/abb16edf6d6b5de57293ae801b07bf64
- -Step 3: Start adding in the final details and adjusting the shape of the building (if needed).
- Example: http://gyazo.com/4a9dffeb49e9bc4e66e68ab8374482a4
- For your trees, I like the two at the bottom, the larger one on top needs a bit of changes, maybe more branches and add some roots to it.
- I hope this helps & good luck!
- ~ Regards, Jewsef.
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