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Jewsef

Gladiatorgalaxy's review

May 31st, 2015
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  1. Hey this is jewsef and ill be reviewing your plot.
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  3. Alright so to start off your terrain is good, I like it, it has what's supposed to be needed. However, you need to fix your waterfall's bottom, the water is just randomly scattered and it's not looking good.
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  5. For your structure, I recommend deleting what u have and start a new one. Usually for new builders I recommend following these easy steps for building a simple house:
  6. -Step 1: Do the outline of the building (house, tower, etc..)
  7. Example: http://gyazo.com/722eef1311518bf95f3f3f6de824b91e
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  9. -Step 2: Search for a good block pallete and start filling in the house
  10. Example: http://gyazo.com/abb16edf6d6b5de57293ae801b07bf64
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  12. -Step 3: Start adding in the final details and adjusting the shape of the building (if needed).
  13. Example: http://gyazo.com/4a9dffeb49e9bc4e66e68ab8374482a4
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  15. For your trees, I like the two at the bottom, the larger one on top needs a bit of changes, maybe more branches and add some roots to it.
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  17. I hope this helps & good luck!
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  19. ~ Regards, Jewsef.
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