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HeyItsElla

Aquarii's spark plot review

Oct 8th, 2015
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  1. Hi there Aquarii! It's HeyItsElla
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  3. So,I do really like your plot you just need to edit a couple of things!
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  5. I feel that with a few adjustments you can really bring the plot together.
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  7. I feel that the structure (the big building) needs a little improving in regards of palette. The palette of a plot is the colour scheme, and blocks you use to achieve the theme you are trying to show. For instance, a candy land would have lots of reds, whites and pinks, whereas a jungle would be lots of greens and browns. I believe your plot is meant to have an oriental (Chinese, Japanese, Cantonese,Thai.) theme. The large building, try making the amount of different blocks you use smaller, maybe use 3 or 4 blocks, and don't use the bricks and concrete.concrete. Focus on darker colours with a few light highlights.us on darker colours with a few light highlights. The small gazebo type structure is very cute, but replace the sand/sandstone with quartz?
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  9. In regards of terrain (the ground, hills, mountains, valleys, rivers, lakes, etc) I really enjoy what you've done, I like the way it slowly slopes, and the floating terrain has the same sized chunk cut out of the actual ground. The palette you have used is lovely, but try using another type of green material (clay or wool) to the ground to give variety.
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  11. Finally, organics. An organic is an animal, human, or tree;s, bushes and the like that you add to a plot to give it life. Try to replace the tree bark with a darker wood as I don't think the accacia works well with a cherry blossom tree.
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  13. Extra notes- I love the shimmer around the structure you've made with the glass and cobwebs! Nice touch.
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  15. I know it may seem like I'm asking for a lot, but I do love the plot, they're just small touches.
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  17. Thanks!
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  19. ~HeyItsElla
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