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Review for JTardis #1

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  1. STRUCTURE: As for the structure I would first of all say to make the shape more interesting, it is currently very square shaped.
  2. I would also say to add more depth and detail to the walls, currently they are really flat and boring to look at. You can add more detail by doing shapes with stairs or blocks outlining windows etc.
  3. Another thing would be to make the roof more interesting and changing the colour to something that goes with the wood but that you didnt already use.
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  5. TERRAIN: I would firstly say to make the terrain less flat. I would also say to make it less stiff, theres currently alot of a straight lines in your terrain and for your terrain to look natural you will need to add some curved lines.
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  7. ORGANICS: For your trees I would say to firstly make the trunk a bit thicker, currently its really skinny compared to the branches and leaves. I would also say to make the leaves look more natural as currently they look like a set shape. Another thing would be to make the branches look a bit more visible, I would recommend looking online or going outside to see how real branches are shaped etc.
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  9. Good luck and have fun building!
  10. - Crisp
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