Kamisama no Inai Nichiyoubi

KAMISAMA NO INAI NICHIYOUBI

Vivid
**4:33 - Error/Logic - "On Wednesday, He tweaked the numbers in detail." - I would personally just interpret this as "He tweaked the physical properties of everything" since this is literally "assigning and testing values" on things like freezing temperature and gravity etc.
*4:40 - Scriptwriting - "On Thursday, he permitted the flow of time." - "ebb and flow of time" is not implied, nor something that a supreme being permits.
**5:21 - Error - "It wouldn't be long before this world reaches a standstill."
*11:33 - ??? - "I guess it doesn't matter."


FLag

*0:52 - Nuance - "killed everyone?!" - Really needs a question mark.
*1:11 - Nuance - "It's the gravekeeper's job to kill them."
**1:51 - Scriptwriting - "Our people need a gravekeeper."
*1:56 - Error - "Only someone who carries Lady Alpha's blood in her veins." - Not just "relatives". Her direct bloodline.
**5:21 - Error - "It wouldn't be long before this world reaches a standstill."


CR
*15:12 - Nuance - "What?"