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jpminiVN

/jp/ mini VN project

Jun 2nd, 2013
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  1. Protagonist
  2. :early twenties American NEET guy (dropped out of college?)
  3. familiar with computers
  4.  
  5. Plot:
  6. One day, protagonist browsed /jp/ as usual and clicked the link to japan-guide or such site. He found the heroine's profile (Japanese high school girl) and sent a message half in fun. Surprisingly getting a reply from her, then they start to exchange mail with each other, but protagonist lies about his profile: he proclaims himself "an American uni student girl".
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  8. Heroine is "sunao-cool" at first. And then as they become close, she attaches herself to him aka "onee-san".
  9. Protagonist's mind blown. He falls in love quickly.
  10. And, but, his complicated mind(still remained) is crossed by a suspicion: "Is her profile true...?"
  11. His love, his suspicion, and twinge of conscience(cheating her) make him go mad.
  12. Finally he dare to send a trap mail and install a back door into her laptop.
  13.  
  14. "If she is a sweaty fat neck beard..."
  15. Struggling with suspicions, He turns on the web-cam on her laptop secretly.
  16. "WTF!? NO! I can't beleive she is such shaggy gray fluffy..."
  17. Oh, wait. It's a plushie. A teddy bear sits in front of the laptop.
  18. Little sound of splashing...someone takes a shower...
  19. Before long, a human figure comes into the room. But teddy blocks the view.
  20. Excessive amount of time has passed slowly, protagonist is about to go mad, at just the time: teddy is gotten out of the way.
  21.  
  22. A little face is looking at the display brightly.
  23. She is - heroine is a 6th grade elementary school Japanese girl.
  24.  
  25. Protagonist's mind blown. Because he likes little girls as same as every single /jp/er...
  26.  
  27.  
  28. (To be continued)
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  30.  
  31. Heroine:
  32. Living with her mother. Her parents have lived separately for 5 years.
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  35. Development (my proposal):
  36.  
  37. [Act 1]
  38.  
  39. - MC and heroine become more close. They both worry about deceiving the other, but they both don' t have the courage to tell the truth.
  40.  
  41. - MC sneaks a look at her private password-protected blog and knows her real feelings and various aspects.
  42.  
  43. - MC's acquaintance of University appears.(the role of trickster)
  44. :/a/ regular and convention-hopper. Fluent in Japanese. Calling himself "lolicon". MC doesn't like him but there is no choice but to rely on his Japanese skill. MC seeks to hide heroine's existence from him...
  45.  
  46. [Act 2]
  47.  
  48. - (False) crisis of heroine. (e.g. changing schools problem)
  49. MC saves her secretly.
  50.  
  51. [Act 3]
  52.  
  53. - (True) crisis of heroine. (e.g. spirit away (Kamikakushi) )
  54.  
  55. [Ending]
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