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  1. Didn't know about the psyche thing. Just went with the TL.
  2. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_02.46_2013.08.23_01.42.34.jpg
  3. This shit: Wolf says three different terms for pregnancy and they were all slang.
  4. http://thestir.cafemom.com/pregnancy/154844/10_slang_terms_for_pregnancy/106484/knocked_up?slideid=106484
  5. If you don't know your slangs properly. The capitalization stuff was bad. Don't know how I missed it.
  6. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_03.09_2013.08.23_01.45.10.jpg
  7. Yes, it's a mixture because Her ghost magic(?) + demon magic = two different magics that are in her body.
  8. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_03.19_2013.08.23_01.46.17.jpg
  9. No it's powers.
  10. If you wanna leave out that detail, it's fine, but it's what's actually being said, because she does not have enough /power/ to control the magic.
  11. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_08.57_2013.08.23_01.59.09.jpg
  12. >fact
  13. >supposedly
  14. That's the fact, bruh, that she is unwilling to acknowledge. Whenever you add supposedly, you don't want that to happened and you are disagreeing with the said "fact".
  15. https://www.google.com/search?client=firefox-a&hs=CTi&rls=org.mozilla%3Aen-US%3Aofficial&q=%22the+fact+he+supposedly%22&oq=%22the+fact+he+supposedly%22&gs_l=serp.3...5400.5400.0.5569.1.1.0.0.0.0.42.42.1.1.0....0...1c.1.25.serp..1.0.0.CssI-sCWt2k
  16. ^ It's used many times.
  17. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_09.04_2013.08.23_02.00.14.jpg
  18. IS YOUR BROTHER NOT A RELATIVE?! If not, what the hell is he?
  19. Family also works.
  20. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_09.49_2013.08.23_02.01.49.jpg
  21. Are you a dunce?
  22. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mail_order
  23. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_10.48_2013.08.23_02.03.51.jpg
  24. True. You'd be removing the magic, but Franken is saying to suck in the ENTIRE Vampire, so it's not wrong. Neither is magic because the magic would be extracted, but she would become a vampire, I guess, so the entire vampire would be sucked in... or something. There's an error with this line. XD
  25. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_10.51_2013.08.23_02.04.43.jpg
  26. Plain old also works. Don't see how that's wrong though. She's still gonna be plain at the end, basically ordinary.
  27. [9:48:39 AM] Kaitou: http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_11.19_2013.08.23_02.06.02.jpg
  28. Legit error.
  29. Kaitou: http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_12.14_2013.08.23_02.08.04.jpg
  30. What the hell CAN'T "it" be? The precedent is the first word of the sentence.
  31. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_12.32_2013.08.23_02.09.18.jpg
  32. Legit error. "Such powers" or "such a power" would be right.
  33. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_12.51_2013.08.23_02.10.26.jpg
  34. Right. It should be in. Not really redundant as much as STRESSING the point, so it's not wrong.
  35. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_12.53_2013.08.23_02.11.25.jpg
  36. They say the rule in the first episode that is there is a problem in someone's territory, THE BOSS will take care of it.
  37. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_13.20_2013.08.23_02.12.37.jpg
  38. Don't know how I missed that.
  39. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_14.38_2013.08.23_02.14.54.jpg
  40. >Double that. Poor writing, yes. Wrong, no.
  41. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_14.49_2013.08.23_02.16.57.jpg
  42. Um, do you generally not have a reaction when your wrist/arm is broken? Reaction as in YOUR reaction. What the fuck do disco lights have to do with it?
  43. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_14.54_2013.08.23_02.18.31.jpg
  44. No, he's incompetent that he cannot understand the difference in power between them. If he were truly weak, he would see the difference, but rather he's just incompetent enough to not see how weak he is.
  45. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_14.58_2013.08.23_02.19.00.jpg
  46. No, he was not a stone. He is saying he was a small thing(?) with a lot of power inside it. That rock has been condensed from its original state and it's way bigger than it actually is.
  47. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_16.11_2013.08.23_02.29.47.jpg
  48. >Nightstick. Do you not know what a night stick looks like?
  49. https://www.google.com/search?q=nightstick&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=8zUZUrSGBuPl2QXVp4H4BQ&biw=1366&bih=625&sei=9jUZUtWUGaaR2QXQ4oCIDA
  50. Those are night sticks. What he is holding is an actual weapon called Kanabo. It would be like translating Samurai.
  51. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kanab%C5%8D
  52. And the joke wouldn't work because do you SEE him applying lipstick? No, right? He's putting on some random cosmetics and even Oni realized that the best way to go about it is explaining the exact reference instead of localizing it like that. It is totally wrong. TL notes works best AND they even say a slogan afterward.
  53. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_16.21_2013.08.23_02.30.55.jpg
  54. She says it in two different sentences, but yeah, this was poor writing. Adding "That's" would've made it better.
  55. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_18.44_2013.08.23_02.34.15.jpg
  56. My bad. :$
  57. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_19.06_2013.08.23_02.35.17.jpg
  58. Instead of complaining about it, tell me what's wrong with it and how to fix it.
  59. http://www.crymore.net/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Kaitou_Blood_Lad_-_05_720p10bit2F4B9F27.mkv_snapshot_19.33_2013.08.23_02.35.55.jpg
  60. What? Shit. T_T
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