Juan's Story for English

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	‘’Please, please tell me I got accepted.’’ A man whispers as he opens his email on his mother's computer.
‘’Thank you for the application Tim, however your application does not fulfill our expectations. Thank you and good luck in the future!
‘’Another rejection? Are you serious? I’ve tried every workplace in this entire city and I can’t get accepted into a single workplace? Not even McDonalds accepted my application!
	It had been a week since his workplace was shut down after the terrible biochemical gas that Tim made by mixing the wrong ingredients, almost killing his workmates at the same time. That was enough to get him fired.
	‘’Did anyplace accept you yet?’’ Tim’s mother beg, ‘You really need to get a job so you dont have to stay at my place anymore’’ Groaned Tim’s mother.
	‘’No… Tim whimpered, I’ve tried everywhere. And everybody knows about the accident, they won’t accept me.’’
	‘’Well why don’t you try searching for some on the internet? Thats how your old pop found his job.’’
‘’You’re right! Tim exclaimed, thanks for all the help mother, i’ll see what I can find.’’
	‘’Whatever gets you out of my house faster Tim. His mother replied.
Later that night…
	‘’What’s a good site to search from? Hmm… Lets try this one, Craigslist.’’
Tim saw a bunch of ads on the site, all he could find are escort services and drug dealers, until an ad caught his eye.
	‘’LOOKING FOR A PERSON WHO CAN STEAL A VEHICLE FOR ME IN THE MIAMI REGION. CONTACT THE USERNAME ADAM123 ON WHATSAPP.
	‘’Hmm, $10,000 to hijack a car? seems easy enough, with a nice pay, What’s so tough about that? Just gotta sneak and drive away!’’ Tim snickered, he downloaded whatsapp and added Adam123.
	‘’Hello?’’
	‘’Hi, are you here for the carjacking job?’’
	‘’Yes, where shall we meet?’’
	‘’Meet me at the back of Marshall Alley at 9:30pm sharp. Got it?’’
	‘’Understood, cya then.’’
	9:15 rolls by, and Tim, all giddy with excitement with a pinch of nervousness, he’d never done this stuff before, he tries to think how to do it as he hops in his car and heads to the the designated location of the meet.
Tim checks his watch; 9:25, ‘’He should be here any moment he whispers to himself’’
	Tim sees a figure moving from around the corner, and there he was.
	‘’Hey! You must be Adam? Tim said with a frightening worry on his face. The man had scars all over his face, looked like he done a lot of drugs in his life and reeked of cigar smoke.
	‘’Yeah, he croaked, his raspy voice made Tim shudder even more, he asked which car he wanted to do this on.
Adam shows him a picture on his Iphone, a cheap red Honda Civic on his screen.
	Tim scoffed. ‘’That car isn’t even worth 10,000!
	‘’I just need the car, don’t question why, just do the job, come back with the car, take the money and get out of my face!’’ He yelled angrily. ‘’You can find the car at the corner of Winsdale Road and Wesley Avenue. I want that car delivered here before 10. Got it?’’
	‘’Got it, Tim replied with some confidence in himself, this is his first time, but after having time to stay home and play GTA he’s gotten the gist of it.
He sees the car, approaches it, and gives the handle a little tug.
	‘’Locked. man I wish it was that easy.’’
	After minutes of fiddling around trying to get the car open, Tim got frustrated.
	‘’Stupid car! Open up already!’’ Tim grabbed a rock beside the alley and smashed the window open.
	Adam was hiding atop a building, he knew the fun was about to start. He pulled out his phone.
‘’9-1-1 What’s your emergency?’’
‘’H-Hello? Police? There’s a man near my house, looking at a red Honda Civic, I think hes trying to steal it!’’
‘’Calm down sir, where is your location?’’
 	‘’im at the corner of Winsdale Road and Wesley Avenue, please come quick!’’
	‘’We’re on our way, sir.’’
Tim opens up the car from the broken window and fumbles around inside the car, looking for the keys, he finds it in the glovebox as he hears sirens blaring in the distance.
	‘’Oh… No… No, no, no NO!’’ He screams as he jams the keys in the car and turns the key into the ignition. Slamming on the accelerate pedal.
	‘’He is getting away!’’ The cop cars signal on their radio.
	Tim tries to get away, but cop cars block the road. It’s all over for tim.
	‘’Get out of the car and put your hands up!’’ Police yell. They get him out of the car, shove his head onto the dashboard of the car, as they investigate the car, they open the trunk, and find a stabbed woman in the back.
‘’Oh my god… Take him to the car.’’ the cop says with a disgusted look on his face.
A Week Later…
‘’Tim Jackson, you will be sentenced to 25 years in prison for the murder of Mary Martin. Court adjourned.
A Month Later…
‘’Tim, step out of your cell, there is a visitor for you’’ the warden signals to the visitor room. There he sees a man he remembered from that day.
‘’hey, sorry the job didn’t turn out so well. here, take this letter.
	Inside the letter was a shiv and a note, the note read:
Hey, Meet me behind the police station at 2am,
You can escape from your cell at that time
-Adam.
Tim waits until it’s time to strike. Everybody is asleep and he gets working on the cell bars. ‘’Surprisingly strong for a little shiv.’’ He thought as he dismantles the bar from its cell in a couple of strokes.
	He manages to sneak away and finds Adam.
	‘’Hey how you doing bud-’’
	Tim gives him a full on punch to the face, a punch so hard the right side of his face is already starting to swell up.
	‘’Well I didn’t expect that, here, come with me.
	They drive around, and Adam stops at an intersection and sees a man walking down the street. ‘’Wait for me he revolted..’’
	Adam gets out of the car, strikes the old man in the face as Tim stares and watches like a helpless child, for him the whole world stopped as he tried to set in the reality, as Adam stuffs the man in the back with Tim, gets back into the car and whistles cheerfully.
‘’Alright kid, time to get out.’’
‘’Where am I even?’’
‘’Same spot where you took the car, thanks by the way, oh yeah, here you go.’’
Adam shuffles in his pocket and gives Tim the 10,000.
‘’wow, thanks.’’
‘’I should be the one saying thanks. Haha.’’ And he drove off.
Tim takes a taxi home and after an eventful day, he heads to bed.