review for "and he claps the lights on"

Floating in space, void of matter. Everything appears to be blanketed in darkness, nothing but  the glimmer of the dwindling starlight to prove that blindness hasn't overcome. Take cautious yet hurried steps in hope the next won't be the last. Looking around for a way out anything to feel whole again. Then  it begins to take form, a small square of light, in seconds it is within reach. A figure appears and as if a prayer has been answered, he claps the lights on.

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