OFS commentary 12

Sparing a brief smirk of sympathy for the poor losers down on the ground,
 - Rainbow Dash, master of shaudenfraude. :p

she decided to double up on her napping regime
 - Ah, of course she would xD

... No need to make him feel too important, after all.
 - Oh my, what a cute scene ^^

„Front page, Joey,“ she made her demands clear, „Me, in my coolest space suit. Full colour photo, and not with that cheap chemical stuff either. Enchanted.“
 - Oh gawd, I'm loving this more with each passing line xD

A full seven on the awesomeness scale.
 - 7/7 colors of the rainbow hahaha, but I got you there, there's only really 6 in FiM :p

And, in the middle of it all, rested Equestria's finest rocketship, filling out the vast majority of empty volume inside the massive assembly hall. ...
 - How did you manage to get me excited and giddy about an unfinished rocket, how, how!

„Small,“ ...
 - D'awww, Rainbow finally coming out with her feelings.

... Other ponies, smarter ponies, will do that. I'll just stand by here, and watch.“
 - Oh, my, what a bold decision, both character-wise and author-wise.

„Just keep your end of the deal,“ she warned its metal hull, „You hear me?“ „Good.“
 - D'awwwwwwww (again)

„One of the eight laws of motion, applying both to magical and non-magical objects,“
 - LOL, so with magic, that makes eight? Awesome.

.. „Well, there you go! Seriously, I'm not trying to trick you. If it feels right, it probably is. So just say it.“
 - Awww, and the good lessons just keep on pilin'

„Hmm indeed!“
 - Very much xD

„That was just showing off to the other ponies! And I only learned it because Red forced me to!“ ...
 - Hahahaha, oh god, priceless xD when provoked, revert to old ways.

„Just saying, the way you look in those reading glasses-“
 - No way in Equestria Rainbow's gonna forgive that c:

Then, all hell broke loose. ...
 - Oooooooooh xD sorry but my mind likes to hang around the gutter on occasion.

Sure, Rainbow. That always sounds convincing.
 - Haha, we've got a genre-savvy one in our hooves!

„One half-hour interview,“ Redstone announced proudly, „Me, you, alone, talking.“
 - Is it bad that I've got shivers running down my spine now?

„You are supposed to be convincing me here.“
 - Oooooo, that's a real good one.

... After all, it means she has no weakness.
 - Ah, I am constantly positively impressed by how well you manage dialogue and impart wisdom.

Payback time.
 - *smirk*

If the Speaker had a monocle, it would have flown right off. Her expression was delicious; absolutely, utterly, completely, delicious.
 - Oh my, how do I love lines such as this one.

„You know? Next Monday?“
 - Just a little family reunion, you know, nothing special xD

„Comrade Cherry Skies as prime crew,“
 - In retrospect, it couldn't have been any other. :)

Yes, you do, Princess. Yes, you finally do.
 - Delicious doesn't even begin to describe in this case xD

Anyway, we will have to conduct some groundside tests in gas chamber, just to check our maths on much carbon dioxide you can take before fainting.“
 - Obligatory wat.

The silvery tube hit the wall and exploded, leaving a residue of grey, sticky mass that quickly began drying in air.
 - Talk about a concentrated of energy! xD

The entire idea of dressing in style
 - Reference spotted!

getting out a stack of photos she always carried around – just in case of an emergency, of course –
 - Of course, of course.

With a look of deep suspicion spread across her face, Rarity inspected her up close, as if checking she wasn't just some kind of impostor.
 - *sniff* I'm just so proud of how much Rainbow has grown. They don't even recognize her anymore! x)

„Because I'll be commanding the Wonderbolts!“
 - Of course! Aerial safety. Should have thought of that, hehe.

I mean, sure, she did appear at my door a few times, asking for strange chemicals, but I just gathered she was trying to make muffins or something!
 - Because of course, you'd give her poisonous chemicals when you think she'll make muffins with it. :p

„I just helped her get the materials. But she built it, all by herself!“
 - Oh my, a challenger approaches!

„Imagine it, miss Dash! Rocket mail!
 - So, a rocket, strapped on Ditzy's back. What could ever go wrong x3

It had taken her weeks to understand how that could possibly work, and here, this filly got it in seconds. Seriously. What the hay?
 - Kids. Gotta love dem ^^

But what if it wasn't?
 - The plot thickens?

History. She repeated that meaningless word to herself. It was all such a joke. Hundreds of years from now, ponies would remember this day, and speak about it as if it were something great; when really, it was just disgusting eggs along with a severe lack of sleep. Ridiculous.
 - Hahahaha, great passage.

„But, on this dawn of a new era, I ask you: What else is science, but very friendship incarnate? ...
 - Ah, beautiful. Truly beautiful.

History. She shook her head in disbelief. What a joke.
 - I can't help but be in awe at the depth of your commentaries.