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MonkeyManofLife's Novice Review

Jul 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly terrain. I like the palette, but a lot of it is still fairly flat. I can see you've brought up some of the areas with small hills; add some more of these, and spread some of the out, so they're all one instead of multiple small hills.
  4. You could also have some small grassy oasis areas, which have alive palm trees and ponds - the contrast is always nice with sand areas.
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  6. Secondly, organics. You have nice trees and a nice amount of them, however they're all a little basic in design. Give them a small amount of roots, even if they are just in the ground, a little bit up around the base however. You could also give them multiple branches coming off, on some of them, similar to acacia trees, but not that basic in design! I also think the leaves need to be less pyramid looking - what I mean by this is there's no variation, it just goes up and inwards like a pyramid.
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  8. Lastly, structure. You have a pretty nice tavern looking building in the corner. It has nice detailing and depth, and even a cute little interior. The roof is holding you back, however. Take a look on google how tavern/western buildings look. I highly recommend not using stairs or slabs for a roof, and instead using full blocks. You could use slabs for the overhang on the porch area at the front, but have a couple layers in it; don't keep it all flat.
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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