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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly terrain. I like the palette, but a lot of it is still fairly flat. I can see you've brought up some of the areas with small hills; add some more of these, and spread some of the out, so they're all one instead of multiple small hills.
- You could also have some small grassy oasis areas, which have alive palm trees and ponds - the contrast is always nice with sand areas.
- Secondly, organics. You have nice trees and a nice amount of them, however they're all a little basic in design. Give them a small amount of roots, even if they are just in the ground, a little bit up around the base however. You could also give them multiple branches coming off, on some of them, similar to acacia trees, but not that basic in design! I also think the leaves need to be less pyramid looking - what I mean by this is there's no variation, it just goes up and inwards like a pyramid.
- Lastly, structure. You have a pretty nice tavern looking building in the corner. It has nice detailing and depth, and even a cute little interior. The roof is holding you back, however. Take a look on google how tavern/western buildings look. I highly recommend not using stairs or slabs for a roof, and instead using full blocks. You could use slabs for the overhang on the porch area at the front, but have a couple layers in it; don't keep it all flat.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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