Novice Fireleafs Reject

Hello Fireleafs

I'm KoLusim and I will be reviewing your plot today.

Let's start with what I like about the plot, first of all, there is some nice dynamic terrain. This means that the terrain is on  many levels horizontally and vertically. This gives a very nice feel to the plot and makes it very nice to look at.

What you need to work on in order to reach the next rank is your detailing on the houses. For Aspirant we don't want to see any slab spam, or ‘weird’ and unfitting detailing, mainly through the use of stairs, misplaced on your small house. Although it looks cosy, by reworking some of the details. There are also many places on the plot with no detail, just blank spaces with nothing on. This makes the plot look bland. There are many things you can do with the space instead of leaving it blank.

I like how you have a lot of height in the plot. The cave is a really cool idea and it was terraformed well. However it leads to nothing. If you were to add some more structure and content down there, you would be set for Aspirate. Please don't give up, you're so close to Aspirant!

Sorry, your plot was denied.

Kind regards,
KoLusimKreations
Octovon Helper