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- I will be using the default MarisaA, playing the "supershot more balanced version".
- The way this works is that I give you 100 points in the beginning, and will deduct or give points as I see fit. A final total of 200 points will mean that you have done perfectly in my eyes.
- With that, here I go then.
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- Nonspell background sucks. (-3 points)
- No music. (-1 point)
- Boss sprite is ugly and pixellated. Uh oh. I'll have to deal with it for the entire script... (-5 points)
- Nonspell 1 is boring. It is also way too hard even for phantasm. (-4 points)
- Also, the attack took almost a minute to shoot down. I don't want to spend 45 seconds on a nonspell. (-6 points)
- Cutin is REALLY ugly. (-5 points)
- Spell 1 looks like a reverse version of Sparen's Suicune's first spell. (-6 points)
- No background used. (-3 points)
- Continue #1 used here. Note that I'm supposed to be a Lunatic player. What does this mean?
- (Current total 67)
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- Nonspell 2 = Eternal Meek with additional rings. (-6 points)
- Spell 2 is LITERALLY the same as Spell 1 except the other way around and with other bullet graphics. (-9 points)
- Continue #2 used here. Random shit is NOT my forte.
- (Current total 52)
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- Nonspell 3... RAINBOW CRAP FLYING EVERYWHERE. YEAH. NO. I'm getting walled off here and OH SHIT. BOMB. (-11 points)
- Continue #3 and #4 used here.
- Spell 3... eh... nah. You completely ignored the gimmick of Kagome Kagome, which is supposed to be bullet walls getting blown apart by a bubble. Here it's just everything flying really fast. (-8 points)
- Continue #5 and #6, as well as #7 used here.
- (Current total 33)
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- Nonspell 4. HOW DO YOU STREAM THIS!!? HOW DO YOU DODGE IT AT ALL?? THIS IS NOT HOW YOU USE AIMED BULLETS. (-14 points)
- Continue #8 used here.
- Spell 4... It's... PRETTY, I'll give you that... (+2 points)
- But it's completely impossible. I get walled in, so. (-4 points)
- Continue #9 used here.
- (Current total 17)
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- Nonspell 5. This is not how you make bullets fall. You need a way to actually hit the boss. Fix this. Hard. (-6 points)
- Spell 5: Excuse me, how do you even hit the boss? How am I even supposed to do anything with shit crisscrossing every which way and there's no other way to go except where the boss is not? (-9 points)
- Continue #10 used here.
- (Current total 2)
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- Nonspell 6. UNILATERAL FUCKING CONTACT. (-8 points)
- Spell 6: See nonspell 5 for details. (-4 points)
- Reusing a gimmick from a nonspell to a spell. (-5 points)
- Continue #11 used here.
- (Current total -15)
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- Nonspell 7. VERY SMALL BULLETS that fire FAST BULLETS, even when they're at the BOTTOM OF THE SCREEN. If there's a word to describe this, it's "clusterfuck". (-12 points)
- Continue #12 used here.
- Spell 7: Koishi hell much? THANK GOD it's possible. However it's too easy for Phantasm. Have more hearts. (+3 points)
- (Current total -24)
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- Nonspell 8. Booooooooring. Also, stupid hitboxes. (-4 points)
- Spell 8: What the hell do you even do here? This pattern, I can't read it at all. (-9 points)
- (Current total -37)
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- Nonspell 9. You've just passed the number of nonspells a Phantasm stage boss has. It's not even that creative, so... Bluh... (-8 points)
- Spell 9: This one's impossible too. Even without gravity I think it'd be insane to even try. (-16 points)
- Continue #13, #14, and #15 used here.
- (Current total -61)
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- Spell 10: Finally. The last spell. And..... THE ENTIRE THING IS WAY TOO EASY. You tried to pull a Knockout in Three Steps, but it obviously flopped. Very disappointing. (-22 points)
- HEY, I ACTUALLY CAPTURED A SPELLCARD. WOW.
- (Current total -83)
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- Here I add some other things.
- "Original version" is literally SHINY MODE. No one even wants to do that. Please remove it. It's a waste of space. (-44 points)
- Test all your scripts, not just the final product. I can see that you left the Single scripts available, but the bullets are invisible. (-13 points)
- You copy-pasted your resources over a BUNCH of times. Meaning, there are three "se" folders. Sound files are often the largestpart of a script archive. You should post different versions of the script instead of forcing everyone to download every version at once. (-17 points)
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- Final score.
- -157 / 200 (-78.5%)
- That's right. You got a negative score. I don't even consider this a script.
- This is the third time I gave someone a negative score.
- However, the two other scripts ended up with around a score of zero.
- But not you. You ended up going so far below zero that ... well, why should anyone even bother downloading this!?
- Give up.
- Now.
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