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- TRUTH OR DEER, by TwinkiePinkie
- ---ACT 1: INTRODUCTION---
- >fluttershy in whitetail forest, helping some critters
- >antlers coming out of a bush
- >pov from the bush, someone is spying on her
- >she notices, thinks it's a deer, "what could a deer be doing here" and stuff
- >actually a pone, dan dan dan!
- >(credits roll in here?)
- >treebark runs away
- >she tries to chase him, with no avail
- >at the library
- >fs:"poor colt was all lonely and scared, we gotta help him! can i haz tracking spell pls?"
- >they find deers, fs and ts are curious about them (general thought is they're uncivilized)
- >"look there's the poor colt"
- >"hey colt, ur a pone" "am not, i got no wings or horns!" "u got no antlers either"
- >he's unsure
- >deer: "ur a pone son"
- >he's shocked, he accepts to go with them
- ---ACT 2: CONFLICT---
- >back to ponyville, rest of mane6 are introduced: rd think he's nuts, rarity whines about uncivilized savages (may have to tone down this two a bit); aj, thanks to applebloom, remembers zecora's episode, and pinkie remembers "over a barrel" ("we all have hooves at the hand of each legs")
- >introduce him to ponyville with a song ("the pone way"?), very refined, broadway-style
- >>pinkie holds a party, introduces too many people (CMC too loud?)
- >>twi show him books, he can't read, she's shocked (he eats them? maybe there's the drawing of a leaf)
- >>rarity makes him clothes, he's uncomfortable with them (he eats them too? i'd like to show him to really be kinda nuts)
- >>possibly more (at school with cherilee?)
- >>ends with ponyville chorus?
- >maybe while he's resting they talk a bit more about the issue.
- >remember: fs and twi unsure (deers seemed kinda ok, still he's nuts), rd and rarity for keeping him away from deers, aj and pinkie for letting him go
- >they find he's run off again
- ---ACT 3: RESOLUTION---
- >back in whitetail woods, where they first found deers, they're not there anymore
- >treebark's there, crying
- >mane6 realize he cares about them, "we'll help you find 'em!"
- >he's good at tracking and all that crap, gains confidence (rd is impressed)
- >he sings the second song, very rough and savage (bongos? celtic?), while finding clues for deer's passage. something about how he likes living with deers, and finally BEING a deer
- >deers join in the last chours, maybe same melody of the first song but very different vibe, showing they're "civilized" too
- >"we've been looking for you everywhere, son"
- >a wild cutie mark appears
- >mane6 realize and say goodbye
- >back at the library, letter to celestia
- >sometimes you think what's better for somebody, but...
- >sometimes different doesn't mean worse
- >spike wants to add that ur race (dragon, phoenix...) is unimportant, it's what *stuff* that truly determines what you are
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