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  1. TRUTH OR DEER, by TwinkiePinkie
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  3. ---ACT 1: INTRODUCTION---
  4.  
  5. >fluttershy in whitetail forest, helping some critters
  6. >antlers coming out of a bush
  7. >pov from the bush, someone is spying on her
  8. >she notices, thinks it's a deer, "what could a deer be doing here" and stuff
  9. >actually a pone, dan dan dan!
  10. >(credits roll in here?)
  11. >treebark runs away
  12. >she tries to chase him, with no avail
  13.  
  14. >at the library
  15. >fs:"poor colt was all lonely and scared, we gotta help him! can i haz tracking spell pls?"
  16. >they find deers, fs and ts are curious about them (general thought is they're uncivilized)
  17. >"look there's the poor colt"
  18. >"hey colt, ur a pone" "am not, i got no wings or horns!" "u got no antlers either"
  19. >he's unsure
  20. >deer: "ur a pone son"
  21. >he's shocked, he accepts to go with them
  22.  
  23. ---ACT 2: CONFLICT---
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  25. >back to ponyville, rest of mane6 are introduced: rd think he's nuts, rarity whines about uncivilized savages (may have to tone down this two a bit); aj, thanks to applebloom, remembers zecora's episode, and pinkie remembers "over a barrel" ("we all have hooves at the hand of each legs")
  26. >introduce him to ponyville with a song ("the pone way"?), very refined, broadway-style
  27. >>pinkie holds a party, introduces too many people (CMC too loud?)
  28. >>twi show him books, he can't read, she's shocked (he eats them? maybe there's the drawing of a leaf)
  29. >>rarity makes him clothes, he's uncomfortable with them (he eats them too? i'd like to show him to really be kinda nuts)
  30. >>possibly more (at school with cherilee?)
  31. >>ends with ponyville chorus?
  32. >maybe while he's resting they talk a bit more about the issue.
  33. >remember: fs and twi unsure (deers seemed kinda ok, still he's nuts), rd and rarity for keeping him away from deers, aj and pinkie for letting him go
  34. >they find he's run off again
  35.  
  36. ---ACT 3: RESOLUTION---
  37.  
  38. >back in whitetail woods, where they first found deers, they're not there anymore
  39. >treebark's there, crying
  40. >mane6 realize he cares about them, "we'll help you find 'em!"
  41. >he's good at tracking and all that crap, gains confidence (rd is impressed)
  42. >he sings the second song, very rough and savage (bongos? celtic?), while finding clues for deer's passage. something about how he likes living with deers, and finally BEING a deer
  43. >deers join in the last chours, maybe same melody of the first song but very different vibe, showing they're "civilized" too
  44. >"we've been looking for you everywhere, son"
  45. >a wild cutie mark appears
  46. >mane6 realize and say goodbye
  47.  
  48. >back at the library, letter to celestia
  49. >sometimes you think what's better for somebody, but...
  50. >sometimes different doesn't mean worse
  51. >spike wants to add that ur race (dragon, phoenix...) is unimportant, it's what *stuff* that truly determines what you are
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