Grammar Corrections #3

-_-PLEASE STRONGLY CONSIDER THE FOLLOWING CRITICAL GRAMMAR CORRECTIONS AND MODIFICATIONS TO YOUR LATEST DOCUMENT-_-
Weekly Soon™ - Week 17: Bending Update Boogaloo

YOU KEEP MISSING THE TM MARK IN THE TITLE AND IN THE BODY OF THE BLOG. KEEP IT CONSISTENT.
Incorrect usage of the boogaloo meme but whatever


"These moves function very similarly, but offer new mobility and extra protection to each element that will enhance your bending battles at all levels." --> "These moves function very similarly but offer new mobility and extra protection that will enhance your bending battles."
(COMMA SPLICE --> missing a subject after the comma. Either add one or do the change I did)
("to each element" redundant and unnecessary)
("at all levels" --> What levels? What does this describe? Do you mean "in all aspects?" Unnecessary either way)


Earth Armor: "Armor which slows caster, but has the highest damage absorption amount." --> "Armor which slows the caster but has the highest damage absorption amount."
(forgot an article which you use in the descriptions of Fire Armor to describe "caster")
(ANOTHER COMMA SPLICE)


Fire Dodge: "Dodge, leaving fire on the ground in your wake, burning enemies" --> "Dodge leaving fire on the ground in your wake and burning nearby enemies"
(COMMA SPLICES, added "nearby" because thought it would fit)


Air Armor: "Armor which has the lowest damage absorption, but greatly increases speed." --> "Armor which has the lowest damage absorption but greatly increases speed."
(COMMA SPLICE)


Water Armor: "Armor which slows down enemies by click." --> "Armor which slows down enemies by clicking."
(clicking?)


Water Dodge: "Dodge, leaving snow on the ground in your wake, slowing enemies." --> "Dodge leaving snow on the ground in your wake and slowing nearby enemies."
(COMMA SPLICES, same issue)


"and we’ll be giong over each of them" --> ""and we’ll be going over each of them"
(SPELL CHECK ERROR)


"Stay tuned for next week’s post, where we talk with the winner!" --> "Stay tuned for next week’s post where we announce and talk with the winner!"
(COMMA SPLICE)
(added "announce" but remove if you aren't actually going to announce it)


"so make sure to send us an email at writing@avatarmc.com to make sure your recommendation reaches us!" --> "so make sure to send us an email at writing@avatarmc.com to submit your recommendation!"
(double "make sure," fixed)


"Thanks to the whipping our bug fix taskmasters were able to do last week, there arent that many to report this time around. Still, there are a few to report down below" --> "Thanks to the whipping our bug-fixing taskmasters were able to do last week, there aren't that many to report this time around. Still, there are a few that were patched this past week:"
(Awkward, tried to fix this as best I could but I simply can't understand it)
(MISSING AN APOSTROPHE)
(double "report," fixed (suggestion))