Sankarea

[Commie]

**2:58 - Mishearing: "I've always liked the way they look."
**3:12 - Error (minor on important line): "was fantasy-like{OR moe} situation with zombies." / Not just "seeing".
*3:41 - Error (minor): "They put my mind at ease."
*4:14 - Error (minor): "The Shiryouji Temple"
*5:02 - Scriptwriting (minor): "Other than dealing with our senile grandpa," / "escapades" is made up.
*6:20 - WTF (minor): "...keep their emotions in check even at times like this? / "against even this?" sounds retardedly awkward.
*9:44 - Over-interpretation (minor): "They're in one of the very few private schools for affluent girls in the region."
**10:13 - Error/Over-interpretation: "A super rich girl enrolled this year!"
**10:43 - "Not all rich grils grow up to be nice" OR "Looks can be deceiving." / Disagreed with previous comment instead of adding another example.
*12:39 - Error (minor): "I'm doing fine! I'm doing just fine!"
*17:08 - Over-interpretation (minor): The translated line sounds like keeping secrets.
**17:40 - Error: "but it'll probably just shuffle about aimlessly like a zombie." / He expects it to become a zombie if it actually works.
**19:44 - Error: "Girls like you always end up with a loser!"
**20:01 - Error (minor): "There's the pride I expected from a rich girl."


[SFW]
*2:58 - Error (minor): "I've always liked the way they look." / Not talking about design of his figures or movie characters (he think's they're people, not things).
3:12 - Scriptwriting (negligible): "I've always had fantasies of getting into moe situations with Zombies." / Does not imply romance at this point, but it flows well into next scene.
*3:41 - Error (minor): "They put my mind at ease."
*4:14 - Style (minor): "The Shiryouji temple" is like saying "Shiryou Temple temple". Also, "ancient temple" is mentioned in the next line so it's not necessary to elaborate here.
*7:43 - Error (minor): "I'll love you" -> "I can love you" / Quite different in terms of implied meaning.
*9:44 - Detail (minor): "They're in one of the very few private schools for affluent girls in the region."
**10:38 - Detail/Dodge: "I guess it's true girls grow up to be so innocent and pure when they're born with a silver spoon!"
*12:07 vs 13:29 - Consistency(minor): "Sanka Rea" or "Sankarea" for all instances unless there's an exception in tones etc.
*12:53 - Nuance (minor): "Come over this weekend." OR "You'd better come over this weekend."