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FoodLovingPanda

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May 15th, 2015
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  1. Hi there
  2. My name is FoodLovingPanda and I will be reviewing you
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  4. This review will be divided into three sections: Terrain, Organics and Structure and I will explain each section separately, so let us begin.
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  6. TERRAIN:
  7. The floating island is small but it is shaped nicely and has nice block variety.
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  9. ORGANICS:
  10. Your mushroom is nice, your tree however needs some work. The tree trunk is okay, but the treetop is what is bothering me. Do not make it so spherical and please do not leave it empty on the inside, fill it out nicely. Leaving some air blocks will make it look puffier and more transparent and therefore more realistic.
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  12. STRUCTURE:
  13. Now your structure has repetitive detailing in its walls. Also the structure as you made it does not fit in with the rest of the build. The floor pattern looks random and busy as do walls in regard to color.
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  15. You have not used up the entire plot to its fullest but left quite some area empty. Also nothing is connected on your plot. It seems like you did all that stuff just so you have them. When making a build you need to connect it through theme, placement of builds in terrain and with terrain itself. You have none of that going on on your plot.
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  17. Have fun building
  18. -FoodLovingPanda
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