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  2. Many Fire-type Pokemon appreciate Tentacruel's Rapid Spin support such as Victini, Darmanitan, Chandelure, and Entei. However, they share a Ground-type weakness with Tentacruel. Tentacruel fits well on stall-based or balanced teams because it can absorb Toxic Spikes as well as set up its own. It also provides valuable Rapid Spin support. Although Tentacruel is a great team supporter, it appreciates support as well. Due to the fact that it has no reliable recovery or anyway to remove status, Florges and Umbreon make excellent partners, as they have access to Aromatherapy and Heal Bell, respectively. Jirachi makes a good teammate as well because it can set up Stealth Rock as well as pass Wishes, although it shares a Ground-type weakness with Tentacruel as well.
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  7. Many Fire-type Pokemon appreciate Tentacruel's Rapid Spin support such as Victini, Darmanitan, Chandelure, and Entei. However, they share a Ground-type weakness with Tentacruel. Tentacruel fits well on stall-based or balanced teams because it can absorb Toxic Spikes as well as set up its own. It also provides valuable Rapid Spin support. Although Tentacruel is a great team supporter, it appreciates support as well. Due to the fact that it has no reliable recovery or anyway to remove status, Florges and Umbreon make excellent partners, as they have access to Aromatherapy and Heal Bell, respectively. Jirachi also makes a good teammate because it can set up Stealth Rock as well as pass Wishes, although it shares a Ground-type weakness with Tentacruel.
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