Katawa Pony - 1 -

Can you tell me what you think? (Tried to make something similar to Katawa Shoujo)

>Day 100
>Behind the Music Auditorium
>Octavia called you behind there after her performance
>"Anon... did you like the performance? I played that last one just for you."
>It was snowing
>Her breath could be seen in the air in front of her
>Faintly, you can see a bit of rosin on the tip of her mane
>"I was lacking a bit on the first suite and-"
>She stopped when you were dusted her shoulder off
All better!
>She turns away shyly
>Her blush was quite visible now, even through the snow
>"Hey Anon?"
Yeah?
>What do you think of ponies?
Haven't we been over this? I like every p0ny! You've all been so nice to me, ever since I entered Equestria.
>She begins to look at her hooves
>"Well... what about... a special somep0ny?"
>She digs a small hole in the snow with one of her hooves
>"I mean..."
>Your heart begins to pound

>What is this...
>This feeling?
>You can barely make-out what Octavia is saying
>"Anon... I...LOVE-"
>Your vision begins to blur
>You can hear nothing, but your own heart pounding
>Your blood felt like it was boiling
>You fall to your knees
>Octavia, she was the only thing you can see now.
>She looked at you in horror.
>Your heart was moving so fast, you swear it could just-
>BURST!
>Blood splattered out of your mouth, and onto the snow
>The last thing you can see is Octavia running away
>You can feel the snow on your face
>all you can see is the blood that stained it.

>Its been four months since you heart attack...
>Four months
>left alone with your thoughts
>It gave you enough time to come to terms with your situation
>Arrhythmia
>A strange word.
>An alien one.
>One that you dont want to be in the same room with.
>A rare condition. It causes the heart to act erratically and occasionally beat way too fast.
>It can be fatal
>Apparently you had it a long time, the shock from entering Equestria probably gave it to you.
>Because of this... condition, you've had to stay at the hospital.
>When you was first admitted, it felt as if you were missed...
>For about a week, your room was full of flower, balloons and cards
>But, the visitors soon dwindled and all the get-well gifts began trickling down to nothing shortly after.
>You realized that the only reason You had gotten so many cards and flowers was because you were on such good terms with Octavia.
>Maybe some of the ponies were genuinely concerned, but you doubt it.
>You are the "weird-O" human, after all...
>Octavia was the last to stop visiting.
>After six weeks, you never saw her again. You never had that much to talk about when she visited, anyway.
>You didn't touch the subject that was between you and her on that snowy day ever again.

>At some point, you had ceased the whole internet and videogame thing.
>You began to read instead.
>There was a small "Library" at the hospital, although it was more like a storeroom for books You began working your way through it, one small stack at a time. After consuming them, you would go back for more.
>You found that you liked reading, maybe even a bit addicted.
>You started feeling alone, naked without a book in hands.
>You loved the stories
>Especially the tale's of Sherm or even Leucine.
>Those Stallions have been through alot.
>The days became increasingly harder to distinguish from each other, differing only by the book you were reading and the weather outside. It felt like the blurred into some kind of gooey mass you were trapped inside, in stead of moving within.
>A week could go by without you really noticing
>Sometimes, you'd pause in the realization.
>Other times, all the things that surrounded you would painfully crash into your consciousness, through the barrier of nonchalance you had set up for yourself.
>The pages of your book would start to feel sharp and burning hot. The heaviness in your chest would become so hard to bear that you had to put the book aside and just lay down for a while, looking at the ceiling as if you were going to cry.
>But that happened only rarely.
>And you couldn't even cry.

>Today, the doctor stallion, old and wrinkly, comes in and gives you a smile. He seems exited.
>That wrinkly, old smile always gets you.
>"Anon, how have you been doing? Taking your medication?
Yeah, I have...
>"Good, good. I have excellent news for you, Anon!"
>What is it? A visitor?
>"Its time to let you go! Well, not let you go... but move."
>What? This is... amazing! You've read every novel, magazine, or anything else you can put your hands on!
>"You are relocating to... Ponyville! Its a nice place, friend of mine tells me they have the greatest cider in all of Equestria!"
>You can care less about the drinks...
>The Stallion informs you of your medication though, how you NEED to be taking it.
>Horse pills...
>"Ponyville specializes in the medical field, most ponies- or, um... "creatures" that are... sick go to Ponyville."
>great, surrounded by crazy ponies, and ponies that are sick.
>Maybe it wont be so bad?
>"Its only if you want to go..."
Of course! Why would I miss a chance to...
>You couldn't finish the rest of that sentence
>You remain silent, after a minute of thinking.
>"Well, the next train to go to Ponyville is tomorrow morning! We'll pack your things and have your paper work transferred in a jiffy!"

>That night you DEFINITELY couldn't sleep, and it wasn't the pain.
>A new roow, new books, new doctors, new friends...
>New friends? Why did that pop into your mind?
>You never really had friends, here, in the Canterlot Hospital
>The mares and colts were nice, but they left after they got better.
>broken wings or sprained hooves
>They all went away eventually
>Now it is your time.
>That following morning, you ate a big breakfast
>The nurse pony that tend to you gave you a small basket
>It was filled with cookies and small muffins
>The nurses seem to be the only ones that will miss you, and your doctor
>Your doctor put his hoof on your shoulder
>"Its time."
>You exit the hospital and make your way toward the train station, your doctor walking with you.
>You turn back to see that nurse pony looking out the window
>She seems to be in a daze, until she caught sight of you
>She waves, then makes her way out of sight.
>You always thought of her as a really nice mare.
>Well, she WAS your nurse after all.

>At the train station, your doctor checked to see if you have all of your belongings.
>"Wallet?"
Check
>"Clothes?"
Check!
>"Medication?!"
CHECK!
>"Sorry, Anon, but its just... im might not see you again. You have been a wonderful patient and all."
>His voice was deep, and calming
>"Make sure that you stop on the 3 stop! Otherwise it will circle back, and you'll have to stay here!"
Will that be so bad?
>You both laugh
>The train signals all passengers to board.
>"Anon, I hope that one day, we may see each other once more."
>He gave you a wrinkly smile
As do I.
>You shake his hoof, which contained a Pocket Watch.
Whats this?
>"A good-bye present. Now you'll always know what time it is. You always seem to lose track when you are reading!"
Thank you... so much!
>Watch was silver, and the inside had two, small, red hands ticking.
>This was one of the greatest gifts you had ever received.

>You make your way onto the train.
>You were seated in the back of the train, next to the window.
>You can see your Doctor walking off, crocodile tears streaming down his face.
Hey!
>He turns around
Tell the nurse, I said, Good-bye!
>He smiles and waves
>"Sure thing my boy!"
>You could never get that image out of your mind
>That old stallion, with the wrinkly smile.
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>The ride to Canterlot was alot shorter then you had hoped
>You had just gotten to a really juicy part in your book.
>"Comeon everyp0ny! Head on out, you here? Watch your step, and remember to grab everything!"
>The masculine unicorn, stallion was herding everyone of the ponies out.
>You check the time on your new watch, then put it away in an orderly fashion.
>As you head off the train you can see it.
>Ponyville
>It was quite vibrant, really. and all the ponies seem happy.
>You dont skip a heartbeat, and make your way toward your new home.
>Happy Pony Homes...
>Sounds like an old peoples home...
5...6...7!
>Your room was the furthest down the hall.
>You didnt mind, at least it was on the first floor
>You open to see a a few boxes stacked
>The rest of your room was empty, aside from the bed and refrigerator.
>You look out the window
>The sun was high in the sky
>The birds chirpping
>and... oh, look! A pool!
>You never knew how to swim, but you've read about it in books.
>Books... The library!
>You put your stuff down and made your way towards the public library.

>7:40
>That pocket watch seems to be useful then you thought.
>You hope that the library is still open
>The large tree is now was towering over you
>You place your hand on its bark
>It really was a tree...
>You make your toward the entrance.
>You knock
>Wait... this is a library, why would you-
>The door opens
>There stands a little purple lizard
>"Hello, can I help you?"
Oh, hey little guy, I was just wondering if I can just-
>"IM NOT LITTLE! Twilight says im a BIG boy dragon!"
Arent you... a lizard?
>He looks at you puzzled and upset
>"Im a DRA-GON! DRAGON! Lizards do that weird tongue thing"
>He sticks his forked tongue out
Look, im sorry. My name is Anon, I just wanted to borrow some books and-
>You were then interrupted by the sound of a loud bang.
>"Twilight?! TWILIGHT!"
>Spike ran off into the library

>You stood at the door
>Entering someones home wasn't-
>Wait... this is a library!
>You make your entrance, only to be called loudly and obnoxiously.
>"ANON! ANON!"
>Spike?
>You strife towards the purple dragon, dodging any book stacks in the way.
>A purple unicorn is laying on the ground, her horn's tip, scorched.
>Spike was over her, trying to shake her back.
>"Twilight, wake up! WAKE UP! ... ANON! SHE ISNT BREATHING!"
>Your heart began to race
>What is happening? Is it... another... heart...
>Your vision began to blur
>You can hear Spikes voice calling out "Twilight, Twilight!"
>This mare is going to die, if you do nothing.
>You dropped to your knees
>Your arms wrap around her awkwardly
>"Anon!"
>You use what ever strength you have to stand up, with her in your arms.
>She is isnt as heavy as you thought.
>But... you really didnt feel anything from her.
>Your heart was beating so fast, you swear, if she was awake, she could even feel it.

>The walk toward the Hospital was the hardest thing you've ever done in your life
>Each step talking more of your breath then the last
>Spike was leading you
>One of your knees drops
>It felt like it shattered under you and "Twilights" weight
Come on body! One more lift!
>Your shaking legs couldnt handle much more.
>Spike began to push you up.
>The next thing you know, your back on your feet.
>Why were you saving this mare?
>Why didnt you just go get help?
>How did you get in this situation in the first place?
>Aww, yes... a book.
>You were sweating bullets.
>Your walk through hell was coming to an end.
>The hospital was just in arms reach.
>Spike ran ahead, to inform the doctors and nurses.

>You found a near by bench to rest your weary legs
>It was hard, but anything would do.
>"Twilight" Was lying on your lap
>Your body felt slightly numb...
>Twilight was beginning to breath again.
>Her eyes met yours
Hey, sleepy head.
>She had a look... she seemed sorry
Hey, dont mention it.
>She didn't say anything...
>Her eyes closed and she began to sleep.
>Your heart began to pound again.
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>You lay wake in your bed.
>The events that has happened will not be forgotten anytime soon.
>Your legs where still throbbing.
>Maybe you should see a doctor?
>Naw...
>You turn to your side, to check the time
>12:30
>You need to get some sleep.
>Tomorrow is when you will see her again.
>Tomorrow...
>How will she react to what happened today?
>The thought of seeing her again began to make your heart race.
>It began to ache a little, but it was a good ache.
>Before you knew it, you had a little smile on your face.
Twilight...
>Her name sounded like heaven coming out of your lips.
Twilight.
>You are sure to tell her... That she has a beautiful name when you see her again.
Twilight!
>Before you knew it, you were repeating her name over and over again.
>Your turn once more, despite the ache
>12:40
>You need some sleep...

>The sun was high in the sky
>You crept out of your "coffin" and made your way toward the shower
>The warm water calmed you.
>First thing, go to the library!
>Spike... Twilight...
>You step out of the shower, then take your morning medication.
>Ugh, horse pills...
*Gulp*
>It never gets easier
>You slab on a pair of pants and a loose T-shirt and make your way out.
>You look at the time.
>9:45
>A bit early, hope you don't catch her during breakfast
>You can see the library in the distance
>A pink pony seems to be guarding the entrance.
>You decided to kindly greet her and-
>"WAAAAAAA!!!" She inhaled
>She dashes of into the distance
>...

>You don't think to much of what had just happened.
>You knock on the door again.
>...
>The door slowly crept open
>It... was her.
>She looked into your eyes
Twilight, I...
>Something smashed into your back
>"Muahahahaha!"
>You turn, on the ground.
>It was that pink pony
>Twilight Smiled
>"Sorry for my friend, she is a little... jumpy!"
What? You're the one that jumped on me!
>"Huh? I didnt jump on you, Pinkie- Wahahaha! No, im sorry! I'm, PinkiePie!"
>...
>Twilight gave gave a small sigh, then put up a fake smile.
>"Oh! Okay, Twilight! Um... You must be Anon! Spike told me about you! Wahahaha!"
>...
>"Thanks... for yesterday, Anon. I really, appreciate it. I was doing this spell and... Well, "I" wasnt doing the spell, but Twilight was. Anyway, I was doing this spell and things didn't turn so good."
>Twilight had a sorry look on her face, then she bowed.
>"Anon, I want to make it up to you..."
>Twilight leaned in.
>"Lets go on a date, okay? I hate being in debt and all..."

>Wait, what? I...
>"Wahahaha! Sorry, let me explain, Im Twilight's translator!"
>Twilight gives a matter of fact look.
>"Yeah, Pinkie- I mean yeah! I am her translator! AWWW this is hard..."
Don't worry, I think I understand.
>Twilight gives a slightly shocked look.
>"Your... not gonna ask why I cant talk, or WHY Pinkie- I mean, why I am Twilight's Translator?"
Its your business... If you don't really want to talk about it-
>"Muahahaha! Anon, your funny!"
>Twilight gives an "unapproved" look
>"What?"
>Awkwardness began to increase.
>"Anon, if your looking to borrow a few books, your more then welcomed inside!"
>The three of you made your way into the library
>You began to examine the books
>They were examining you....
>Everywhere you moved, there eyes followed
>You picked up a few books, then made your way toward the two mares that were eyeing you down.
Um...
>"Yeah?"
Can I borrow these?
>"WAHAHAHA! Anon, your funny! This IS a library you know!"
>...

>You thanked them, then made your way out.
>WOW that was awkward.
>Lets see what random books you grabbed...
>BettySpaghetti, Azathoth, and Aether's AppleRape...
>Eww, rape? You HATE Clop stories...
>Hope the other two aren't the same... clop...
>You shuffle around with your keys to open your door.
>Suddenly, you were hit... hard
>Ouch!
>You turn to see what hit you.
>It was an orange mare
>"Sorry,  I was just-"
>She looked at you
>"OH, HI NEIGHBOR!"
>The orange mare was trying to stand up
>She was missing her back two legs...
>You helped her up
>"Aww, thanks. My name is AppleJack, you?"
Anon, pleasure.
>"I live in room 6, right next door! Um... can you help me with my...ugh..."
Sure
>You didnt know what she was going to say, why did you say sure?
>"Excellent!"
>She opened her door and invited you in.

>It smelled like apples and fresh greens
>"Awww shucks Anon, sorry I bumped into ya earlier."
>She tosses you an apple and sits down on her bed
>"How ya like'N the place? Kinda dull if you ask me."
>She takes a bit
>You begin to wipe your apple
Kinda painful, if you ask me.
>Your legs were still throbbing
>"Sorry again-"
No, no...
>You take a bite of your apple
>Maybe it isnt so bad...
>The room door busts open
>Its a cyan pony
>her eyes are half open...
>Or half closed?
>"Got any pudding?"
>"Sorry Dash, fresh out!"
>"Huh... who's the weird guy?"
>AppleJack gives a more serious look
>"Dash, this is Anon! The -special- guy that will be living in the same-"
>Dash is in your face...
>"Seems like a normal chimp..."

Im not a chimp! I-
>"The chimp can talk... guess he does belong here."
>"Rainbow Dash! Sorry Anon, she isnt always like this."
>You notice her two front hooves are missing... and probably half her brain.
>She walks over to AppleJack and leans on her
>"feelin the LOVE?"
>Where have you heard that before?
>Anyway...
>You finish your apple and begin to make your leave
>before you leave AppleJacks room, RainbowDash stops you.
>"So... what really IS your weakness?"
Uh... weakness?
>"Nothing wrong with your outside... maybe your inside?"
>Where is she going with this?!
>No matter, just make your leave.
>As you place your hand on the door knob...
>"I bet its something wrong... below..."
W-WHAT?!
>"Something wrong with your tackle?"
NO! I HAVE A HEART PROBLEM! ARRHYTHMIA!
>She puts on a more relaxed face
>"I prefer the other story better..."
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>Other? WHAT?!
>Sheesh these ponies...
>You prefer not to be further insulted, so you make your way out.
>You turn to see RD still staring at you.
>She probably is thinking of another insult to hurl at you
>nope!
>You make your escape...
>When you hit the end of the hallway, you see another pony
>A yellow pony exiting her room.
>Half her face seems to have been... burned.