[F4M][Script Offer] Don't Look Back [Domme][count][Revenge]

There are quite a few notes, on this one, but honestly feel free to take this wherever you like. Mix things up, cut things out -- whatever /you/ feel is best.
Trust your instincts over my writing.
Hopefully it inspires something. :)

[Sheets rustling]
[sounds of hands gently stroking fabric]
[husky breathing at first then...]
oh?
[Bright, cheery]
Finally awake, then?

Yeahh.. see I figured that would work..
between the sweet smell of my bath soap
on my soft skin,
and of the soft curve
of my breasts
/press/ing against your back
[breathing deeply, sensually]
my sensual breathing
[whispered]
soft whispers
in your ears
as you can't help but notice
the warmth of my hot..
ready..
cunt..
it's getting your heart racing already, isn't it?
oh..
or is it the way
my hand is ever so [not a huge fan of the wording in the next few lines tbh, but I feel like some rhythmic speech pattern would sound nice] methodically
meteronome-like
stroking
the fabric
of your shorts..?
you probably want to turn arounnnd [Casually listing off things, like she's counting them off on her fingers]
flip me on my back
and /fuck/ the hell out of me
until I cum..
[Suddenly, LOUD-ly]
STOP.
[firmly]
No. You do NOT get to turn around.
..
[Sweetly instead of firm]
Not yet. :)
[Faux surprise]
huh
That's strange
You know.. I could swear that.. when you started to move..?
When you started to turn.. to face me..
[slight pause, explaining these things in a condescending tone]
wellll, that when I told you
so /firmly/
to 'stop'?
[Spoken matter of factly; the way Sherlock Holmes or Nancy Drew would say "As I thought.."]
Hmmm.. yeah, I think your cock actually jumped
What am I suggesting?
Welll...
[Amused]
Oh, are you trying again?
[Punctuated. Mean.]
Well Don't. You. fucking. DARE.
[slight pause again, followed by more faux surprise]
Whoa
haha yeah, thaaat confirms it
It seems like you enjoy a stern
forceful
command.
And that's why you're going to sit fucking still
While I take out your hard and ready cock
and continue to stroke it
[starts stroking]
Hmmmm
Yes, I think that you like it when I talk to you like this
I mean..
I know that usually, if I'm a bit too.. 'forceful'?
If I'm a little.. hmm, rude?
[getting to the point]
Okay, sure, if I'm being kind of a bitch--
while we're out in public, I mean--
[very domme, condescending]
then you seem to take it as a perrrrsonal challenge
that is uh.. you seem to take it to mean that /youuu/
[Listing off items again]
simply MUST take me home at the soonest opportunity
toss me on the bed
and well, fuck the bitch right out of me
...and you know what?
It's chauvanist.
It's silly.
Annnnd it's exactly why I do it
Yeah.
In fact, I mean, I know you're a smart guy
and we've come to know each other pretty well, right?
At least /this/ part, I think
So-
[Sudden, very commanding]
Sit. Fucking. Still.
Haha, wow, that shiver you do gives me a rush every time
I mean, what, do you want me to 'spank' you next?
Haha-
[Angry.]
I did NOT say you could turn around.
[Amused again, pleased with the reaction she keeps getting]
Ooo, wow.
It's like this firm grip I have on your cock
can just make you listen to anything if I apply a little pressure.
Hmmm
Well, as I was saying
I think you figured out how I'll get when I really need it;
how I'll start to get an attitude. Unintentionally at first..
But then.. I'll see that look in your eyes
that burning desire to put me in my place
I think you've seen how that makes me weak in the knees
how fucking wet I get just /thinking/ about getting that rise out of you
And I think that you thought you could play a little trick on your poor little lady
Uh-huh
I think that you /saw/ what that did to me..
.. earlier tonight? ..when I got maybe a little drunk?
And I started acting.. hmmm, 'maybe' a little too..
[Admitting, matter of factly]
..well, when I turned into a real bitch
I think that you saw through it all
and thought it would be sooo funny
[listing]
if you just brought me home
droppped me off
and laid down to sleep back at your place
Uh-huh
[whispering, seductive]
So that's why I decided to make my way over here
let myself in
and get you /so/ ready.. /so/ aroused..
so that you would just need--
NEED--
to /fuck/ me..
to shoot your hot load inside me
or to feel the soft flesh of my breasts against your hard cock
or to lose yourself in my wet mouth as I sloppily sucked you off
or to cum on my chest, or my face, or paint my pretty red lips white
that's what I need to make you feel-
[Domme as can domme can be. Angry. Confident.]
DONT. Fucking. MOVE.
-so that I.. could do /this/:
[Calmly]
10..
9..
oh that's right, I REMEMBER how much you like these
8...
[moaning, but also obvious she's putting on a show for his benefit]
ohhhh and when I uh uh
7..
[mockingly, followed by a paticularly self-indulgent and evil laugh]
moaaaan like this, right? hahahaha
6..
5..
4..
3..!
[that same voice, followed by a condescending tone]
or when I uh.. fuck with your head a bit?
4.
..
..
..
STAY.
You are going to sit still while I jack off this throbbing fucking cock of yours
3...
[enunciating, emphasizing, urgent]
That's right. When I get to the end.. YOU are going to shoot
YOUR load SO fucking hard...
Your PC muscles are tensed, your entire body is like one giant, wound, spring
2..
[faux desperation]
the pressure is... unbearrrable
you CAN'T. hold it in. annnny more.
[Faux sweetness]
And when I get to the last number..?
[VERY demanding.]
You BETTER. Fucking. CUM.
1.
Cum... NOW.
[laughter, giggling]
Hahahahaaa, wow
You really took that all to heart, huh?
So you know? I guess I know /you/ pretty well, too
Oh, what was that?
No, no you can't turn around yet.
And you're wondering, why do I have this firm grip on your cock?
Ohhh...
[slightly more stern]
Well I just wanted to remind you
that I know what you like
And I CAN give you.. EXACTLY what you want
But sweetie..? [faux innocent, turning to stern the next line]
If you EVER try to deny me again?
Instead of redecorating your wall with a huge geyser of your splooge
you're just going to be left here
with a throbbing, rock-hard erection
blue balls, buzzing and filled to the brim with sperm
and NO ONE to help finish you off..
Cause I can tease, too, dear. And I can end it a little /too/ early.
...
[dominant laugh, followed by a sweetly delivered ending]
Haha. So. Just wanted to make sure we were clear on that, sweety.
[Sweet kiss on the forehead]
See you tomorrow! :)