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  1. computer love
  2. start date: july 2013
  3. end date: ongoing
  4. genre: generic tumblr comic
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  6. Art: 1 star- The art in this comic is the worst part, everybody has a terribly shapen head with baby doll eyes & improper anatomy
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  8. Storyline: 1 & a half star- This comics storyline is actually kind of nifty, it has refugees & rats & soldiers going to antarctica, but that's thrown out the window to focus on everyone being gay
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  10. characters: 1 star - there are no characters in this comic, everyone has the same face but with a different palette or hairstyle but ultimately they all serve the same purpose- to be gay to cater to SJWs
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  12. misc. details: this comic is written by a statistic, not a person, as anyone who creates anything just to get an "ok" from SJWs isn't really a person
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  14. overall- 1 star: this comic is bland, boring, and is nothing new
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  16. background -
  17. since about october 2014, everyone on twitter has been going crazy over trivial subjects like anita sharkessian and gamer gate, only because one person from each side threw an insult or something, twitter became a battleground of SJWs, trolls, and people from 4chan, so really that's how I found Computer Love. ever since gamer gate has came out, thousands of women on the internet have been making up their own sexual preferences like demigirl or demiboy which i can't fully comprehend, and making up their own "intellectual" properties. the bad part about this is that I've gone through thousands of their creations and haven't found a good creation yet, this probably has something to do with the fact that this whole ordeal made everybody try to create their own game or comic, but not knowing how to do so, so they just looked up poorly made youtube tutorials. this seems like a long exposition this is just background of how all these comics work, review computer love, and you've got almost every comic ever made on tumblr reviewed.
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  19. downfall - the comic failed as soon as it thought this was a good cover page -http://www.clcomic.com/ it's a NSFW warning, but to be honest the art is so bad that even the nudity isn't nudity.
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  21. story and plot -
  22. this may seem like a copout or something but there really isn't any story here, this comic doesn't know what it's trying to do, so don't try to get a coherent narrative out of this,
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  24. Art review - this art looks like something you'd find if Picasso & MC Esher had a kid, then drugged that kid at age 4, put into the other side in the Insidious movie, then forced him to draw, it's really that bad. every character in this comic looks like they're stoned out of their minds
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  26. writing review -
  27. i don't understand what's the point of this comic like, it could be the next worst thing if the creator puts more poorly constructed tumblrisms in the comic, but so far all i've got is that this comic is poorly drawn because it's not even a comic. this is literally the thought process of every white knight & SJW, the thing that makes me cry at night is that people are paying $3.00 a week to get one page of the sci fantasy epic of the century, like, you can literally picture the main character Lucy, spouting some random tumblr "equality" gobble de gook. seems like everything in this comic was an afterthought, like, look at the text, Ivy has the pensMENship of a 5th grader, and the story isn't anything. the story literally only exists so that nobody can call this a true queer orgy comic, but that's really what it is
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  29. author biography -
  30. if you've read the background you pretty much understand who Ivy Jane is, she's really just the same, generic, boring "genderqueer demigirl" on tubmlr, i really can't even define her personality because it's not there, it's not.
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