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TheScottie

CageCreeper Rejection review

Jun 17th, 2015
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  1. Hello! Im TheScottie and i will be reviewing you!
  2. The review is split into three parts, Structure, Organics and Terrain.
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  4. Structure. The Plot has no structure, there is very little chances of a plot being passed with just organics, I'd definataly like to see some structure on the plot c:
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  6. Organics. The Angel should be made up off organic shapes, Like Circles, not rectangles.
  7. Using this image i would suggest redoing the shapes. http://gyazo.com/2c05052133271e65c30b190e52ce2718
  8. Also paying attention to the fact that the clothes would not just cling to the body, Making the clothes look much more free and movable would add alot of effect to the angel its self.
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  10. Terrian. The terrain is not bad but i would definataly suggest making the pallet much less messy! Making the terrain a mix of two or three blocks max that have good contrast would work c:
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  12. Good Luck!
  13. ~TheScottie
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