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  1. Hello Marmar,
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  3. This is Feeder of HF. I hope you are doing well since last we interacted on Skype. I finally cobbled together my idea for a rather large commission.
  4. I tried to make this as concise as I could. None of the details are law, everything and anything can be changed at your leisure.
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  6. Core concept: Doom on a throne of a ruined radiant ancient, radiant base on fire, radiant women heroes scattered about around/on him, about to penetrate/penetrating TA
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  9. Copious nudity and battle damaged clothing are what I'm looking for.
  10. The women are wearing their normal identifiable attire, but it is so damaged that most of their body is exposed.
  11. No cosmetics are necessary for this one unless you want to see a specific set.
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  13. Characters: Doom, TA, LC, and some others, possible one or two haven't fully submitted (looking at you LC).
  14. As for the superfluous characters, any of the others can work but they have to be Radiant aligned. Five total women for poetry's sake.
  15. It comes down to who you would want to put there honestly, I like them all as long as they're bipedal (although I have my preferences with Lina/CM/Drow, but I'd have nothing against WR/Luna/Mirana in this).
  16. As for scale, Doom is large enough to support heroes chained to his wings/armor.
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  18. Pose on primary chars: TA's front is to the viewer, in Doom's lap area.
  19. I'm torn between Doom standing or sitting on his throne. Which would look better? Is it possible to see a sketch of both? What is your take on the pose?
  20. I think Doom is the type of character that wants to see the being he's dominating eye to eye during an exhange, but that'll hide a good chunk of TA's features.
  21. The drastic changes in expression/physical changes will be obscured and I really don't want that.
  22. TA facing the audience lets more of the action be seen and keeps the focus almost entirely on her.
  23. There is a way around that, making Doom's arms/hands dynamic to each sequence.
  24. Having Doom hold TA's head back so he can look her in the eye in the first image, then hands to her thighs/legs for the pumping action.
  25. Could also have Doom tearing away her breastplate initially.
  26. I recognize that this would add much complexity to the image, and am willing to compromise.
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  28. Pose on secondaries: either have a few strapped to Doom's wings/armor or throne.
  29. Have LC chained next to Doom. LC could either be next in line or already taken but not fully subservient.
  30. Those stuck on the armor/throne have Doom-womb.
  31. How they are attached is entirely up to you.
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  33. Background: Daytime, burning radiant base, signs of a lost battle. Would prefer to have no corpses visible.
  34. Various other heroes' weapons could be discarded about. Lots of freedom here for you.
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  36. Expressions: Pre-penetration TA is anger/defiance, penetration is shock/fear/bargaining, climax is pleasure/lust/acceptance.
  37. Doom's are also dynamic. From mild bemusement to focused intensity to contempt. Might be hard to do since his face doesn't move all that much.
  38. LC is anger/gritting teeth.
  39. Other fems are mind-broken. Or not. Again, I am open to whatever expressions you think would be appropriate or interesting.
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  41. Fancy doodads/extras:
  42. Here's a part that may be complex. Since this is a sequential piece with the penetration, I'd like to see the ambient effects around TA change along with her demeanor.
  43. Pre-penetration her refraction bubble is up. Penetration it is shattering. Climax it is gone.
  44. TA's aura should go from her natural pink/purple aura/glow to a more red one during this, as a kind of litmus test to how Doom is dominating her.
  45. Penetration should show a visible bulge, as Doom's member is proportionally massive. Climax has TA getting Doom-wombed.
  46. There should be an Aghanim's scepter somewhere visible on/near Doom.
  47. This works as some sort of explanation as to why the other characters still have that Doom-womb thing going on.
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  49. References (more detailed ones can be added if necessary):
  50. http://dotahattery.com/ works as a decent resource to see characters in 3D.
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  52. That "Doom-womb" thing, phrase was actually coined by Spider. It's essentially a cuminflation with a pretty pentagram:
  53. http://i.imgur.com/vTcPQR9.jpg
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  56. That's a lot of words. No need to take this all in at once. We can break this into processes and I can explain more things at your leisure should you want.
  57. Money is no issue. This is pretty big, so I'd request a rough ballpark so I can make sure I have the appropriate funds for you as quickly as possible.
  58. I look forward to your feedback. Thank you for your time.
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  60. Quick end of note question, I've seen you referred to as he and she in the various places I've seen you talk. So I don't accidentally offend, which do you prefer?
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