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- Hello Marmar,
- This is Feeder of HF. I hope you are doing well since last we interacted on Skype. I finally cobbled together my idea for a rather large commission.
- I tried to make this as concise as I could. None of the details are law, everything and anything can be changed at your leisure.
- Core concept: Doom on a throne of a ruined radiant ancient, radiant base on fire, radiant women heroes scattered about around/on him, about to penetrate/penetrating TA
- Copious nudity and battle damaged clothing are what I'm looking for.
- The women are wearing their normal identifiable attire, but it is so damaged that most of their body is exposed.
- No cosmetics are necessary for this one unless you want to see a specific set.
- Characters: Doom, TA, LC, and some others, possible one or two haven't fully submitted (looking at you LC).
- As for the superfluous characters, any of the others can work but they have to be Radiant aligned. Five total women for poetry's sake.
- It comes down to who you would want to put there honestly, I like them all as long as they're bipedal (although I have my preferences with Lina/CM/Drow, but I'd have nothing against WR/Luna/Mirana in this).
- As for scale, Doom is large enough to support heroes chained to his wings/armor.
- Pose on primary chars: TA's front is to the viewer, in Doom's lap area.
- I'm torn between Doom standing or sitting on his throne. Which would look better? Is it possible to see a sketch of both? What is your take on the pose?
- I think Doom is the type of character that wants to see the being he's dominating eye to eye during an exhange, but that'll hide a good chunk of TA's features.
- The drastic changes in expression/physical changes will be obscured and I really don't want that.
- TA facing the audience lets more of the action be seen and keeps the focus almost entirely on her.
- There is a way around that, making Doom's arms/hands dynamic to each sequence.
- Having Doom hold TA's head back so he can look her in the eye in the first image, then hands to her thighs/legs for the pumping action.
- Could also have Doom tearing away her breastplate initially.
- I recognize that this would add much complexity to the image, and am willing to compromise.
- Pose on secondaries: either have a few strapped to Doom's wings/armor or throne.
- Have LC chained next to Doom. LC could either be next in line or already taken but not fully subservient.
- Those stuck on the armor/throne have Doom-womb.
- How they are attached is entirely up to you.
- Background: Daytime, burning radiant base, signs of a lost battle. Would prefer to have no corpses visible.
- Various other heroes' weapons could be discarded about. Lots of freedom here for you.
- Expressions: Pre-penetration TA is anger/defiance, penetration is shock/fear/bargaining, climax is pleasure/lust/acceptance.
- Doom's are also dynamic. From mild bemusement to focused intensity to contempt. Might be hard to do since his face doesn't move all that much.
- LC is anger/gritting teeth.
- Other fems are mind-broken. Or not. Again, I am open to whatever expressions you think would be appropriate or interesting.
- Fancy doodads/extras:
- Here's a part that may be complex. Since this is a sequential piece with the penetration, I'd like to see the ambient effects around TA change along with her demeanor.
- Pre-penetration her refraction bubble is up. Penetration it is shattering. Climax it is gone.
- TA's aura should go from her natural pink/purple aura/glow to a more red one during this, as a kind of litmus test to how Doom is dominating her.
- Penetration should show a visible bulge, as Doom's member is proportionally massive. Climax has TA getting Doom-wombed.
- There should be an Aghanim's scepter somewhere visible on/near Doom.
- This works as some sort of explanation as to why the other characters still have that Doom-womb thing going on.
- References (more detailed ones can be added if necessary):
- http://dotahattery.com/ works as a decent resource to see characters in 3D.
- That "Doom-womb" thing, phrase was actually coined by Spider. It's essentially a cuminflation with a pretty pentagram:
- http://i.imgur.com/vTcPQR9.jpg
- That's a lot of words. No need to take this all in at once. We can break this into processes and I can explain more things at your leisure should you want.
- Money is no issue. This is pretty big, so I'd request a rough ballpark so I can make sure I have the appropriate funds for you as quickly as possible.
- I look forward to your feedback. Thank you for your time.
- Quick end of note question, I've seen you referred to as he and she in the various places I've seen you talk. So I don't accidentally offend, which do you prefer?
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