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Tayter_Kat

CorinneHD

Jul 13th, 2015
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  1. Hello there CorinneHD, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Novice....
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. Your houses are great for The novice world, but on some of the walls, you are missing depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add more depth to a build by adding fences, trap doors, slabs, buttons, and stairs. This will complete this category.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees. You are doing great on this, you do not need to fix anything in the category. Great Job!!!!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. For now being a novice and having W/E, your terrain is a bit dull. Try adding more cliffs and hills all around to make it more interesting.... BE CREATIVE! you also have some flat areas on your plot. to fix this, add some hills and craters of some sort to add more variety.
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  10. I wish you lots of luck!!!! <3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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