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- This is Jewsef and I'm gonna review yer plot.
- I like your plot, it got decent look and it's organised. It got a basic structure and basic organics which could rank you. However your terrain is lacking, work on that terrain a bit more and you'd get ranked to novice
- That's it! Good luck and hope this helps!
- ~Regards, Jewsef.
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