[Tsuki] Ozma - 01 Timing Changes

[Tsuki] Ozma - 01 Timing Changes

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:00:21.00,0:00:22.66,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}These trials,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:23.04,0:00:25.71,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}which have happened many times since the creation of the

Earth,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:25.71,0:00:27.71,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}have come again.
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:00:21.00,0:00:22.78,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}These trials,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:22.78,0:00:25.71,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}which have happened many times since the creation of the

Earth,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:25.71,0:00:27.79,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}have come again.
Same issue as Underwater in this part. Link it to the key-frames.

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:00:33.49,0:00:36.98,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The land is dry, the oceans vanished.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:37.39,0:00:40.45,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}And so, vast seas of sand were born.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:40.45,0:00:46.90,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Most of the life that survives is in danger of

extinction,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:46.90,0:00:51.65,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}clinging to the thin atmosphere that remains.
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:00:33.49,0:00:37.39,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The land is dry, the oceans vanished.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:37.39,0:00:40.45,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}And so, vast seas of sand were born.
Dialogue: 0,0:00:40.45,0:00:46.90,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Most of the life that survives is in danger of

extinction,
Dialogue: 0,0:00:46.90,0:00:51.65,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}clinging to the thin atmosphere that remains.
You linked the second and third, but not the first and second. Why?

Scene Bleed #1 - 3 Frame Early Bleed
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:05:18.13,0:05:19.16,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Oh crap!
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:05:18.25,0:05:19.16,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Oh crap!
This one was so easy to spot. A 3 frame bleed is really bad.

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:09:23.26,0:09:25.98,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Come here for a sec.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:25.98,0:09:28.42,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What is it, Chef?
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:09:23.26,0:09:25.50,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Come here for a sec.
Dialogue: 0,0:09:25.98,0:09:28.42,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What is it, Chef?
Don't extend that far over a scene change.

Extended Lead-Out
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:10:32.43,0:10:35.44,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}{\i1}Move{\i0}!
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:10:32.43,0:10:34.86,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}{\i1}Move{\i0}!
End it at the scene change please.

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:11:02.36,0:11:04.30,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}You're hurt!
Dialogue: 0,0:11:04.73,0:11:06.84,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We need to patch you up!
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:11:02.36,0:11:04.30,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}You're hurt!
Dialogue: 0,0:11:04.30,0:11:06.84,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We need to patch you up!
It's not that far off the scene change, link it.

Line Break Error (Preferential)
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:11:18.05,0:11:20.32,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}That'll do it.
Changed
N/A
Split this line up into two lines and time it to the key-frame. Underwater had the same issue here.

Line Break Error (Preferential)
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:11:58.82,0:12:00.96,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}You're scum.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:00.96,0:12:05.30,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}You went out to look for a sand whale and came back with

a woman.
Dialogue: 0,0:12:05.30,0:12:07.08,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}It's not like that!
Changed
N/A
Same issue is Underwater. Split the second line into two separate lines and time to the key-frame.

Key-frame Snap
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:12:55.79,0:12:57.38,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What does that mean?
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:12:55.25,0:12:57.38,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What does that mean?
He stutters here. Reflect this in your subs via "W-what do you mean?" and bring the line to the key-frame.

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:15:33.82,0:15:35.57,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}No one interferes with us.
Dialogue: 0,0:15:35.58,0:15:37.58,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We bow to no one.
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:15:33.82,0:15:35.58,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}No one interferes with us.
Dialogue: 0,0:15:35.58,0:15:37.58,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We bow to no one.
Yes, I'm that pedantic.

Excessive Lead-out
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:17:04.68,0:17:06.21,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Get in the ship!
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:17:04.68,0:17:05.95,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Get in the ship!
Way too long for what's needed.

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:18:59.67,0:19:01.11,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}A sinkhole?
Dialogue: 0,0:19:01.40,0:19:02.61,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Retreat!
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:18:59.67,0:19:01.24,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}A sinkhole?
Dialogue: 0,0:19:01.24,0:19:02.61,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Retreat!
Extend the lead-out of the first line and the lead-in on the second line and link them. They're not that far apart.

Linking Error
Original
Dialogue: 0,0:20:03.43,0:20:06.17,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}LS transition has passed the threshold!
Dialogue: 0,0:20:06.18,0:20:07.59,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Okay.
Changed
Dialogue: 0,0:20:03.43,0:20:06.18,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}LS transition has passed the threshold!
Dialogue: 0,0:20:06.18,0:20:07.59,Main,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Okay.
Yes, it matters (to me).