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DatGamingDoe's Review

May 25th, 2015
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  1. Hello! I'm Cada, and I'll be reviewing you plot!
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  3. First off, the terrain could use a bit more variation in the podzol areas. I'd like to see you mix in some other blocks to give those areas character, such as clay. You could also add various cracks and chasms, hills and cliffs into the terrain. Right now its very flat.
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  5. Next I would like to see you add more. Perhaps dead trees, or more structure, perhaps an abandoned house? Also, I would like to see you add more to that gate. The shape is nice, and I really like the open door thing you've got going on, but it needs to have more detail, right now it's just. . . very plain.
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  7. I really like your idea so far! Keep up the good work!
  8. ~Cada
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