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The One Loudclaw Star Pool RP

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  1. Spottedstar02
  2. Spottedfire padded up to the edge of the water,"StarClan,you haven't helped me much in the past,you let Sunclaw hate me,BRVR leave me,My parents disown me,and my kits hate me,but please help me just this once. I can feel the bad side of me taking over,and it's only a matter of time....please,I just want to lead a good life,but you've made it so difficult"
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  4. August 25 by Spottedstar02 Reply
  5. IcewrathXFeatherswirlXCraneheart
  6. Pantherkit peered out from the shadows, I don't hate you, momma... He slowed his breathing and watched.
  7.  
  8. August 25 by IcewrathXFeatherswirlXCraneheart
  9. Loudclaw
  10. Loudclaw had given chase to Spottedfire, trying his best to keep up, but she was too fast. Soon she... went to the Star Pool?! But that was illegal! He had to find out why.
  11.  
  12. August 25 by Loudclaw
  13. Spottedstar02
  14. Spottedfire sighed,"StarClan,why do you never help me!?"
  15.  
  16. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  17. Rainsplash987
  18. Just then, a ghostly white form emerged, seemingly from out of nowhere. The air turned icy cold, and a blast of stardust lit up the pool waters into a prism of light that reflected off the cave's crytal walls. When the blinding light cleared, it revealed Flashdust's wavering form standing there.
  19.  
  20. August 25 by Rainsplash987
  21. Spottedstar02
  22. "Greetings StarClan warrior" Spottedfire sighed
  23.  
  24. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  25. Rainsplash987
  26. "Hello, Spottedfire," Flashdust replied, sympathy appearing in his usually harsh eyes.
  27.  
  28. August 25 by Rainsplash987
  29. Spottedstar02
  30. "Uh-um" Spottedfire stammered
  31.  
  32. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  33. Afterlife and Redshade
  34. BRVR walked in. He had already cracked. He had tear-stains on his cheeks.
  35.  
  36. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  37. Spottedstar02
  38. Moonstar,Dawnheart,and Moonflight came down from StarClan.
  39.  
  40. "Daddy?" Meltkit wailed
  41.  
  42. "BRVR,please,no" Spottedfire cried
  43.  
  44. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  45. Afterlife and Redshade
  46. BRVR looked down to his paws. He felt a single teardrop. "So hated... So alone... My parents left me for dead... I've killed so many innocent souls..."
  47.  
  48. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  49. Spottedstar02
  50. "Do not blame yourself young one" Moonstar pleaded
  51.  
  52. "I'm so sorry,BRVR" Spottedfire whispered,starting to crack (go insane)
  53.  
  54. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  55. Afterlife and Redshade
  56. BRVR finally cracked. "No, I'M sorry. I've made your life mor miserable than it would be without me."
  57.  
  58. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  59. Spottedstar02
  60. "I would rather live a horrible life with you,than live a perfect life,and have never met you" Spottedfire whispered
  61.  
  62. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  63. Afterlife and Redshade
  64. "I can't fight myself any longer..." BRVR said softly, and collapsed.
  65.  
  66. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  67. IcewrathXFeatherswirlXCraneheart
  68. "Dad..." Pantherkit gasped, his voice merely a whisper.
  69.  
  70. August 25 by IcewrathXFeatherswirlXCraneheart
  71. Spottedstar02
  72. Moonstar,Dawnheart,and Moonflight bring BRVR's Good Spirit to StarClan.
  73.  
  74. "BRVR,no,please. From this day forward my soul is broken." Spottedfire began to cry
  75.  
  76. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  77. Afterlife and Redshade
  78. BRVR stood back up. His good spirit was still there... Slightly. "I wish to be known as" BRVR choked. "Dyingspirit." He whispered, "I..love..you..Spottedfire...and...always....will......" His good spirit died.
  79.  
  80. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  81. Loudclaw
  82. Loudclaw just stood there, frozen in horror at what was happening.
  83.  
  84. August 25 by Loudclaw
  85. Spottedstar02
  86. "Dyingspirit,no!" Brokensoul yowled,before she fell to the ground,"Why! No,no,no,no! My kits,please don't be like your parents,please,I want you to remember me as Spottedfire,not this" She pleaded,barely breathing.
  87.  
  88. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  89. Afterlife and Redshade
  90. Dyingspirit was sitting up, eyes open, but he couldn't see.
  91.  
  92. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  93. Spottedstar02
  94. "My kits,I will miss you!" Spottedfire's eyes closed,and her breathing ceased,her Good Spirit went to StarClan.
  95.  
  96. Meltkit began to cry.
  97.  
  98. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  99. Loudclaw
  100. Loudclaw put his tail on Meltkit's shoulder. "Your parents' good spirits are in a better place now." he murmured to him. "They were always fighting within themselves. Now they're not... but that leaves their dark side."
  101.  
  102. August 25 by Loudclaw
  103. Spottedstar02
  104. "How is that supposed to help!" Meltkit yowled
  105.  
  106. Spottedfire's eyes flashed open,"I am no longer that weakling Spottedfire,I am BROKENSOUL"
  107.  
  108. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  109. Loudclaw
  110. Loudclaw stood up, bracing himself. "It's supposed to help by telling you what's going on. But now.. Pantherkit! Meltkit! Get out, unless you want to be killed!"
  111.  
  112. August 25 by Loudclaw
  113. KittenStyle
  114. "Meltkit whats happening?" Shadowpaw asked running in
  115.  
  116. August 25 by KittenStyle
  117. Spottedstar02
  118. "Killed?" Meltkit questioned,running away
  119.  
  120. "Ha,ha! Loudclaw,do you honestly think you stand a chance" Brokensoul laughed
  121.  
  122. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  123. Afterlife and Redshade
  124. "I AM NEVER BRVR AGAIN. I AM DYIGSPIRIT. BRVR WAS DEPRESSED ANYWAYS." Dyingspirit/BRVR could see again.
  125.  
  126. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  127. Loudclaw
  128. Loudclaw just stood his ground. "Maybe not, but you two will need to stay well away from NightClan..." he growled, unsheathing his claws. If he was going to be attacked, he was going to defend himself, nothing more.
  129.  
  130. August 25 by Loudclaw
  131. KittenStyle
  132. Shadowpaw grabbed Meltkit
  133.  
  134. August 25 by KittenStyle
  135. Afterlife and Redshade
  136. Dyingspirit made evil eyes.
  137.  
  138. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  139. Spottedstar02
  140. "Oh little Loudclaw,you'll never understand! You're one of my only worthy opponents! I will only ever fight you,for killing you would be no fun" Brokensoul laughed
  141.  
  142. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  143. Loudclaw
  144. "Yet you'll kill off the Clan I love? I can't let that happen." Loudclaw growled, stepping back one step.
  145.  
  146. August 25 by Loudclaw
  147. IcewrathXFeatherswirlXCraneheart
  148. Pantherkit wore a horrified expression. He couldn't believe that these two monsters, Brokensoul and Dyingspirit, were once his two poor loving parents, Spottedfire and BRVR. He slowly started to back out of there, shaking his head.
  149.  
  150. August 25 by IcewrathXFeatherswirlXCraneheart
  151. Spottedstar02
  152. "What's the meaning of kill though. Hurt,End,Destroy,or Free,Begin,Start" Brokensoul smiled
  153.  
  154. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  155. Loudclaw
  156. "Enough." Loudclaw growled. "You are not going to annihilate NightClan. Because I will not let you. StarClan wouldn't want you to swell their ranks so rapidly."
  157.  
  158. August 25 by Loudclaw
  159. Afterlife and Redshade
  160. Dyingspirit laughed.
  161.  
  162. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  163. Spottedstar02
  164. "The sad part is Loudclaw,StarClan won't be able to help you today" Brokensoul laughed,unsheathing her claws
  165.  
  166. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  167. KittenStyle
  168. "Spottedfire and BRVR if you can hear me please take your dark forms i don't want Meltkit to be scared for the rest of his life" Shadowpaw mewed movving a paw over Meltkit to protect him
  169.  
  170. August 25 by KittenStyle
  171. Afterlife and Redshade
  172. Dyingshadow lunged for Loudclaw and pinned him down.
  173.  
  174. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  175. Spottedstar02
  176. "They do not have any control over these beasts,young one" Moonstar whispered
  177.  
  178. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  179. Loudclaw
  180. StarClan help me... Loudclaw thought as he backed up, now in the entrance of the STar Pool cavern. The Waterfall area was behind him.
  181.  
  182. August 25 by Loudclaw
  183. Spottedstar02
  184. Moonstar stood next to Loudclaw,"StarClan is with you"
  185.  
  186. Brokensoul started attacking Loudclaw.
  187.  
  188. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  189. Gingerstripe
  190. Greyfur burst out of the bushes, snarling at Dyingshadow. She pushed him over, freeing Loudclaw. She had followed a scent trail that led here.
  191.  
  192. August 25 by Gingerstripe
  193. Loudclaw
  194. Loudclaw nodded at Moonstar's words, and got ready for the battle of his life...
  195.  
  196. He launched himself at Brokensoul, claws unsheathed.
  197.  
  198. August 25 by Loudclaw
  199. Gingerstripe
  200. Greyfur slashed Dyingspirit's face, teeth bared. She tried to get in for a killing bite.
  201.  
  202. August 25 by Gingerstripe
  203. Afterlife and Redshade
  204. Dyingspirit was on top of Loudclaw, biting his head, and back.
  205.  
  206. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  207. Spottedstar02
  208. "So we're playing it this way? Very well!" Brokensoul sighed,slashing at Loudclaw's face,with sharpened claws.
  209.  
  210. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  211. Loudclaw
  212. This is a nightmare... My Clanmates are corrupt and there's nothing I can do about it. Loudclaw thought as he was squashed. He want limp, following one of his favorite techniques.
  213.  
  214. August 25 by Loudclaw
  215. Afterlife and Redshade
  216. Dyingspirit slashed Greyfur's flanks, mercilessly.
  217.  
  218. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  219. KittenStyle
  220. "YOU KNOW WHAT! STOP!!!" Shadowpaw yowled turning into water/dark form
  221.  
  222. August 25 by KittenStyle
  223. Gingerstripe
  224. Greyfur yowled and staggered, but she lunged for his ear, sinking her teeth in.
  225.  
  226. August 25 by Gingerstripe
  227. Spottedstar02
  228. Moonstar started to fight Brokensoul,"You remind me of someone!"
  229.  
  230. Dawnheart stood beside Loudclaw,barely visible.
  231.  
  232. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  233. Loudclaw
  234. He stood back up when he realized that he'd been ignored and was lifted off of. In that case, he launched himself at Dyingspirit, his emerald-green eyes glowing with multiple emoutions; sorrow, hatred, betrayal, and more.
  235.  
  236. August 25 by Loudclaw
  237. Gingerstripe
  238. Greyfur leapt back as Loudclaw attacked Dyingspirit. Instead, she focused on Brokensoul.
  239.  
  240. August 25 by Gingerstripe
  241. Afterlife and Redshade
  242. Dyingspirit laughed. "You think that does anything?" He let that bit of ear rip off. He slashed Greyfur's nose and then hindquarters.
  243.  
  244. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  245. Spottedstar02
  246. "Hello,Greyfur." Brokensoul mewed
  247.  
  248. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  249. Loudclaw
  250. Nothing would stop Loudclaw from attacking Dyingspirit, not after how they'd transformed into something evil...
  251.  
  252. He slashed at Dyingspirit's ears.
  253.  
  254. August 25 by Loudclaw
  255. KittenStyle
  256. Shadowkit's forms flickered on and off and finally she ended up as just her and she thought "I feel diffrenent i think i lost my forms yes i'm finally a normal clan cat" she used all of her anger and bowled into the bodies her parents used to be in
  257.  
  258. August 25 by KittenStyle
  259. Afterlife and Redshade
  260. Dyingspirit donkey-kicked Loudclaw away, and headbutted him when he was off guard.
  261.  
  262. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  263. Loudclaw
  264. "Oof!" He grunted, as he was forced into the wall. He launched himself onto Brokensoul.
  265.  
  266. August 25 by Loudclaw
  267. Afterlife and Redshade
  268. Dyingspirit bit Loudclaw's tail. "Don't think I won't take this off."
  269.  
  270. August 25 by Afterlife and Redshade
  271. Spottedstar02
  272. Brokensoul threw Loudclaw off her back.
  273.  
  274. August 25 by Spottedstar02
  275. Loudclaw
  276. Loudclaw tore his tail away from Dyingspirit; tufts of fur were torn off, but nothing else. He turned to look at Dyingspirit. "Are you sure you don't want me to get backup?"
  277. August 25 by Loudclaw
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