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- [Nutbladder]
- **00:34 - Liberal / "So I tried to be unconventional", he did not imply he had problems with culture being lost at this point in time.
- *06:44 - Error(minor) / "treasure their technology, and their bathing culture" -> "have advanced technology, and treasure their bathing culture"
- *07:22 - Context(minor) / "There, got"??? "There, got it for ya."
- *08:00 - Literal(minor, arguable) / "temperate fruit" -> "tropical fruit", Pinapple, bananas etc are tropical fruits
- **09:48 - Liberal, Consistency(use Latin for more terms if preferred, not just one line)/ "Tyrrhenicum Mare" -> "Gulf of Naples", wrong body of water anyway.
- [WhyNot]
- *00:34 - Dodge(minor) / "So I tried to be unconventional", need something that implies "tried the reverse" to flow.
- *03:48 - Error(minor, arguable) / "Pompei" -> "Pompeii", those are two different cities. Wiki lists "Modern Pompei was founded in 1891", I'm pretty sure he was referring to the ruined city.
- *05:48 - Error(minor) / "Abe Hirosu" -> "Abe Hiroshi", he's the voice actor, guy on poster, and actor for upcoming movie!!!
- *07:35 - Error(minor) / "Anyway, if it will quench my thirst" -> "First, I have to quench my thirst", before telling them who's the boss as mentioned in prev. line or just learn more.
- 09:44 - Error(negligible) / "bay of Naples" -> "Gulf of Naples"
- [gg]
- *1:53 - Error(recurring) / "Marx" -> "Marcus", dammit, I'm business major.
- **5:37 - Mishearing(recurring) / "advertisement portrait", misheard for 「模様紙」
- *06:05 - Liberal(minor) / "I can steal this slave bath", didn't notice the idea gliterring
- 09:44 - Error(negligible) / "bay of Naples" -> "Gulf of Naples"
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