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[TL] Part 4 - Chapter 1

Feb 22nd, 2019
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  1. 1.1 - The Oath at our Fingertips
  2.  
  3. kjo: Haruki.... Haruki!
  4. kjo: Haruki, it's amazing! This song is perfect for Zero!
  5. hrki: Thank you. I knew you'd like it, Takamasa.
  6. kjo: I'm sure Zero will like it too! Especially this part! The phrase right here.... Ah!
  7. hrki: Watch out! ...Oh, come on. You wanna break all of my cups that badly, Takamasa?
  8. kjo: Sorry, sorry. Inspiration hit me, and I got carried away.... Ideas for the stage and performance just keep flooding my mind.
  9. kjo: A brilliant spotlight will shine upon zero as he sings, center stage! Soon after, he will be enveloped by the cheers of his fans! (roar of the audience/crowd)
  10. hrki: That sounds great. Urgh--
  11. kjo: Are you alright, Haruki? You look a little pale....
  12. hrki: Haha.... I pulled an all-nighter so I'm not fully awake right now.
  13. hrki: But continue. Keep telling me about your ideas for Zero.
  14. kjo: It's <i>our</i> dream, Haruki. We and Zero will change the world. We'll bring joy to everyone!
  15. kjo: No other idol is as loved as Zero. (Zero is the most beloved idol in the whole world) And no idol will be able to surpass him, even ten-- no, a hundred years from now.
  16. kjo: Everyone will love Zero forever and ever!
  17.  
  18. ban: Good evening, we're Re:vale! Come on Yuki, greet the crowd!
  19. orks: ...Good evening.
  20. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  21. ban: Thank you for all of your support!
  22. ban: Please keep listening to our music in the future as well!
  23. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  24. <br>**Audience:** Re:vale is definitely gonna be mega popular! Way more popular than Zero, I'm sure of it!
  25.  
  26. <br>**Mr. Shimooka:** And the Grand Champions are.... Re:vale!
  27. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  28. yk: We're the Grand Champions...?
  29. mm: ...We did it. We did it, Yuki!
  30. yk: Oh--
  31. mm: This is amazing.... Re:vale are the Grand Champions! ...*sob* I'm super duper ultra happy!!
  32. mm: Thank you to all of our fans out there!!
  33. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  34. yk: Thank you.... Thank you!
  35. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  36.  
  37. inu: Thanks guys! You better come to NO_MAD's next concert, got it?
  38. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  39. inu: We'll show you even more amazing things! Way more!
  40. inu: We'll beat Re:vale and be the Grand Champions of Black or White! How about that! You guys wanna see it happen, yeah?
  41. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  42. <br>**Audience:** ...We wanna see! ...Show us!!
  43.  
  44. <br>**Presenter:** Our next guest made an aggressive debut, and they're the mega rookies you've all been waiting for-- TRIGGER!
  45. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  46. 9: Thank you for having us today.
  47. 8: Thanks.
  48. 10: T-Thank you!
  49. <br>**Audience:** *cheers* They're <i>sooo</i> hot!!!
  50. <br>**Audience:** I love TRIGGER more than anything else in the world! [DID I GHOSTWRITE THIS LINE]
  51.  
  52. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  53. <br>**Audience:** Congrats on your debut performance!!
  54. <br>**MEZZO":** Tha--
  55. <br>**MEZZO":** .......
  56. 5: ...Thank you very much. We're very happy we got to sing for everyone today.
  57. 4: Yeah.... Same.
  58. 5: Tamaki-kun....
  59. 4: I'm really happy too! Thank you!
  60. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  61.  
  62. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  63. <br>**Audience:** ŹOOĻ...!
  64. haruka: Hmph.
  65. tora: Hey.
  66. min: Hehe.... Hello.
  67. inu: Let's go! You all better scream our names 'til your voices are gone!
  68. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  69. <br>**Audience:** ŹOOĻ is the best! I'll follow them for life!
  70.  
  71. 7: Good evening! We're IDOLiSH7!
  72. 1: Thank you for coming to see us tonight, everyone!
  73. 2: You're in for a fun night with <i>onii-san</i>?
  74. 3: We're super happy to see everyone!
  75. 4: Come on, let's play!
  76. 5: Please listen to the very end!
  77. 6: Let's have the best time of our lives!
  78. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  79. <br>**Audience:** I love IDOLiSH7 so much...!
  80. <br>**Audience:** I'll support you guys forever, and ever!
  81.  
  82. tmg: <i>IDOLiSH7....</i>
  83. tmg: <i>Even when MEZZO" debuted first, or when the centers changed, or when they had a disagreement and lived separately for a while....</i>
  84. tmg: <i>Even when they fought with TRIGGER, or when they tried to save Re:vale, or when they first met ŹOOĻ-- IDOLiSH7 has always stayed seven.</i>
  85. tmg: <i>I believe it's fate, and I'm sure they do too.</i>
  86. tmg: <i>That's the fate we believe in, and that's why we won't give up.</i>
  87. tmg: <i>No matter what happens, IDOLiSH7--</i>
  88. tmg: <i>--Will always be IDOLiSH7.</i>
  89.  
  90. 6: <i>Lalala....</i>
  91. 7: What's going on, Nagi? What's with the big camera?
  92. 6: I bought this to take pictures of cosplays! We should take a commemorative photo!
  93. 5: A photo? The MOP afterparty was yesterday, so I look quite awful....
  94. 4: Sou-chan, do you even remember what happened last night?
  95. 5: No....
  96. 4: Well, you unlocked an achievement yesterday, so.... Maybe it's better that you don't.
  97. 5: Achievement...?
  98. 4: You made TRIGGER kneel 'cuz they were fighting. (1)
  99. 5: You're kidding, right...?
  100. 3: Nagi? Can't you just take it on your phone, like always? Why do we have to make it special all of a sudden?
  101. 6: <i>Oh!</i> It's to commemorate MOP!
  102. 1: Commemorate our loss, you mean? I don't see much point in doing that.... If you're set on taking a photo, then make it quick.
  103. 6: <i>OK!</i> Line up, everyone!
  104. 2: I'll take the photo. You should get in, Nagi.
  105. 6: <i>No, no!</i> Please get in the picture, Yamato.
  106. 2: You hate it when someone's missing from a photo? Well, me too.
  107. 6: Oh....
  108. 2: I hate it too. You know what I mean, right?
  109. 6: ...Even so, someone must press the shutter.
  110. <br>*door opens*
  111. tmg: I can take the photo for everyone!
  112. 7: Manager!
  113.  
  114. <br>To be continued....
  115.  
  116. (1) The 'kneel' Tamaki is referring to is 'seiza' (look it up on google images), which is sometimes used as the 'go stand in the corner' type of (light) punishment for misbehavior. 'But what's so bad abt kneeling???' Listen bro u lose feeling in ur feet the longer u stay in that position and it aint great
  117.  
  118. 1.2 - Smile!
  119. tmg: Good morning everyone!
  120. tmg: While it's unfortunate we didn't win at MOP yesterday, let's all put in some extra elbow grease and aim for victory at the end of the year music show, Black or White!
  121. tmg: IDOLiSH7 is scheduled to appear on a music show later today, and you're scheduled to film a music video for your new song next week!
  122. tmg: It'll be very busy until the end of the year, but I look forward to working with everyone on these projects!
  123. <br>**IDOLiSH7:** Yes, m'am!
  124. tmg: Ah, right! Sorry about that, you needed someone to take the photo, right? We shoot lots of pictures of everyone for work, so taking a commemorative photo in the dorm is definitely something new!
  125. 6: <i>Oh!</i> Manager, you ought to be on this side of the viewfinder. Please brighten up our morning with your smile, lovely as a flower!
  126. tmg: Huh? But....
  127. 2: Nagi....
  128. 1: What a troublesome lot, you all are. Why don't you just use the timer function?
  129. 6: <i>Oh!</i> It must've slipped my mind.
  130. 7: You're so smart, Iori!
  131. 1: I know.
  132. 7: Wow, that wasn't cute at all....
  133. 1: Here, give me the camera. There is always a solution to every problem, no matter what it may be.
  134. 7: Every problem? Really?
  135. 1: Yes. Because I'm the perfect high school student, and because <i>we</i> are perfect.
  136. 4: Woah, Iorin! That was really good!
  137. 1: Come on, let's go. Everybody, line up.
  138. 4: Peace!
  139. 7: Yay!
  140. 5: ...I can't believe I forced TRIGGER to kneel on the ground.......
  141. 6: <i>Oh!</i> <i>Smile,</i> Sougo, everyone! Say cheese!
  142. 3: Nagi....
  143. 6: <i>Three, two, one, smile!</i>
  144. <br>camera shutter
  145.  
  146. <br>**Woman:** It's been a while since I last went to a Re:vale concert!
  147. <br>**Woman:** It's a pity they didn't attend MOP yesterday, but we get to see Re:vale today instead! I can't wait! I'm so excited!!
  148. <br>**Tsukumo Ryou:** Yes, yes-- as you ought to be. Re:vale won't be appearing on television anymore soon after this, just like what happened with TRIGGER.
  149. <br>**Woman:** ...What's up with him?
  150. <br>**Woman:** I'm getting really bad vibes!!
  151.  
  152. rinto: I'm guessing you didn't manage to finish in time for the concert? "We, the Incomplete," that is.
  153. yk: Momo doesn't approve. He has a deep emotional connection to that song though, so there isn't much we can do about it.
  154. mm: S-sorry.... It's not that I don't like your arrangements, Yuki, but like.... It's hard to put into words....
  155. yk: It's okay. There's no need to rush. Why don't we sing "Theory of Eternality" instead? (1)
  156. rinto: Ah, we announced that song just a few days ago. It'll be the theme song for the Universiade Soccer Tournament. The offer came, and you finished the song almost immediately... (2)
  157. yk: Momo really like soccer, so it was pretty easy to picture how I wanted the song. Composing it was a lot of fun.
  158. yk: That, and Momo wrote the lyrics for me.
  159. mm: ...This was basically my first time writing all the lyrics on my own, instead of helping Yuki out with them. I was super nervous....
  160. yk: They're really good. They're very gentle and encouraging lyrics-- it's something you'd write, Momo.
  161. mm: Thank you!!
  162. mm: I thought about how I felt back when I played soccer as I wrote. That feeling when your heart's pounding in your chest as you stand on the field, staring down the opposing team, waiting for the starting whistle....
  163. mm: I felt the exact same way as I wondered, "Will my lyrics fit perfectly with Yuki's melody? Will it sound like something Re:vale would sing?"
  164. mm: I had butterflies in my stomach, and I was so anxious and worried.... But I really wanted to try it and take on the challenge. I stopped thinking about winning or losing, and just threw my all into writing.
  165. rinto: I'm sure someone out there must feel the same way, and Yuki's song with your lyrics will help push them a step forward in the right direction. It's not just for students competing in tournaments....
  166. rinto: Even though we live in an age where we don't need to fight to survive, people are still figuratively fighting on. I'm sure this song will give them courage and steel their determination, and make them shine even brighter.
  167. yk: Okarin, that was <i>so</i> good.
  168. mm: Keep the praise comin'!
  169. rinto: I could praise you two forever! Just as it gets colder and colder as the season intensifies, the dissolution of Tsukumo draws closer and closer....
  170. rinto: With "Theory of Eternality" as our flag, hoisted up high, Re:vale will gallantly and magnificently triumph through the winter! Re:vale shall have the last laugh!
  171. yk: That was <i>so</i> cool.
  172. mm: Re:vale's the best!
  173. mm: Every moment will be a turning point, I'm sure of it.... Even so, every night must come to an end-- spring will come after winter.
  174. yk: Momo, my name is 'Yuki,' remember? The winter is but a mere servant to me. (3)
  175. mm: Oh my gosh, Yuki you're <i>so</i> cool!
  176. yk: I know.
  177. mm: Let's go! So everyone can end the year with a smile as they say 'Happy new year!'
  178.  
  179. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  180. mm: Good evening! We're Re:vale!
  181. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  182. yk: Did you all watch MOP? Wasn't it great?
  183. <br>**Audience:** We watched it!!
  184. yk: Things are only going to get more and more amazing. You all better come with us.
  185. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  186. mm: Whether we're in the spotlight or in complete darkness, you'll have a blast as long as you're with us! Bet you guys already knew that though!
  187. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  188. mm: And as long as we're with you, nothing can scare us! I promise....
  189. mm: Even when I'm an old man, I'll be dancing by Yuki's side!!
  190. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  191.  
  192. <br>**Audience:** *cheers*
  193. <br>**Audience:** Re:vale!
  194. <br>**Tsukumo Ryou:** .......
  195. <br>**Tsukumo Ryou:** Heh..... You won't be able to keep that promise, Re:vale.
  196. <br>**Tsukumo Ryou:** Oh, idols, suspended in the air with nothing but a piano wire-- I'll make sure you fall.
  197. <br>**Audience:** Re:vale! You guys are the best...!
  198. <br>**Tsukumo Ryou:** <i>Bang!</i>
  199.  
  200. <i>To be continued....</i>
  201.  
  202.  
  203. (1) SO I Spent way too much time looking up the name of physics theories in Japanese but 永遠性理論 (eienseiriron/theory of eternality) is basically "quality or state of being eternal"+"theory". Since the lyrics themselves use a lot of math-y/science-y words like 'formula,' 'intersection,' etc I figured I'd go for an equally science-y title, esp when the Theory of Relativity in Japanese is 相対性理論. tl;dr i wanted to mirror real-life scientific/etc theories in the title so i followed the "Theory of" +(noun, ending in -y that describes a state of being)!!
  204. (2) Universiade is the name of a real-life tournament, so that's where they borrowed it from! It's a combination of 'university' and 'olympiad,' so it's a sporting event for university students.
  205. (3) Yuki is in katakana (ユキ) and is actually short for 千斗 (yukito), but yuki (ユキ) also sounds like the japanese word for snow (雪).
  206.  
  207. 1.3 - Wandering Spirit
  208.  
  209. 10: Ugh.... I don't remember anything that happened yesterday at the afterparty....
  210. 8: I figured.
  211. 9: As did I.
  212. ane: You are <i>such</i> a mess. Here, drink some water.
  213. 10: Sorry.... Thanks for the water.
  214. ane: Well, you three <i>did</i> win at MOP yesterday! Re:vale wanted to celebrate too, so I'll let it slide this time!
  215. ane: More importantly, Gaku and Tenn! I can't believe you two had the audacity to fight during the afterparty!
  216. 10: They fought!? Gaku and Tenn did?
  217. 9: Oh. He really doesn't remember.
  218. 8: Huh. I thought he wasn't that drunk since he wasn't speaking in dialect.
  219. 10: Man.... What did you guys even fight about?
  220. 8: Go ahead, Tenn. (1)
  221. 9: Go ahead, Gaku.
  222. 10: I should've known it'd come down to this.
  223. ane: Don't worry, I'll show you the video. I have a couple of recordings from the afterparty on my phone since I wanted to commemorate that night.
  224. 10: Oh! Yes, please.
  225. ane: Alright. I'm going to hit play then.
  226.  
  227. 6: .......
  228. ane: Oh, Nagi-kun.... Why do you look so anguished tonight?
  229. ane: He's still looks absolutely sublime, even when he's suffering from ennui.... Oh, I just want to hold him strongly -- <i>tightly</i> -- in my arms....
  230.  
  231. <br>**TRIGGER:** .......
  232. 10: What was that just now...?
  233. ane: <i>Ahem.</i> Nothing! It was nothing. There we are-- here's the video of Gaku and Tenn's fight!
  234.  
  235. ban: So you guys punched each other in the face? Even though both of you are idols? No wonder you were mad, Okazaki-san.
  236. okarin: See!? Please scold Yuki-kun and Momo-kun some more, Ogami-san!
  237. mm: Wait! You've got it twisted-- Yuki's the wrong one here! He barely knows how to throw a punch but stuck his nose into dangerous business!
  238. yk: Well, I think <i>you're</i> wrong! You were too busy putting me before you, you didn't watch out for yourself at all. Ban, you ought to scold him too!
  239. mm: <i>What!?</i> I can't believe you're asking Ban-san to do that! He's the one who <i>pioneered</i> protecting you with his life!!
  240. ban: Ahaha. You might be right about that.
  241. yk: That's not something to joke about! You two must be out of your minds!
  242. <br>**Momo・Ogami Banri:** You're the last person we want to hear that from.
  243. okarin: The point is, idols shouldn't be getting themselves in danger in the first place!! Does everyone understand?
  244.  
  245. <br>**TRIGGER:** .......
  246. 10: That was a video of Re:vale fighting....
  247. ane: They're bad influences! It's their fault that Gaku and Tenn fought in front of all those people.... Ah, there it is! Here's the real deal!
  248.  
  249. 9: Please don't say anything unnecessary to Kujo-san. I'm fine with how I'm living my life, thank you very much.
  250. 8: Well, I'm not. First Nanase, and now Kujo.... All you've ever done is live for other people.
  251. 9: Do I need to have your approval? I'm doing this out of my own free will, and I look after them both for my own happiness and satisfaction.
  252. 9: There's no need for you to butt in with your arbitrary standards, and look down on me and my situation-- I don't need your pity. That's very rude of you, don't you think?
  253. 8: But what about you? Aren't you being rude to Nanase or Kujo?
  254. 8: お前が何かを我慢して、何かを捨てて、それで幸せになった奴らが、自分のことを恥じないとでも思ってるのか? (sounds angry/righteous) *****
  255. holdback something
  256. throw away something
  257. ppl happy that u did that
  258. embarrased of themselves?
  259. 9: So now you're trying to decide Riku and Kujo-san's feelings for them. Who do you think you are?
  260. 9: <i>I'm</i> the one who decided to do this. <i>I'm</i> the one who wanted this. It has nothing to do with them.
  261. 8: Alright then, I'm worrying about you because I want to. And this is <i>my</i> decision, so you can't say shit.
  262. 9: <i>What?</i>
  263. 8: It's the same logic you used. If you've got a problem with that, then maybe you should reevaluate.
  264. 8: You left your home to follow Kujo for Nanase. I went to meet Kujo for you. What's so different?
  265. 9: ....... That.... That's not fair, when you put it that way.....
  266. 8: It's only unfair because you're too soft.
  267. 9: .......
  268. 8: Nanase once told me that you're kind and giving, like an angel. I told him that wasn't the Kujo Tenn I knew.
  269. 8: But you see, Nanase was right. I finally saw what you're really like. Ryuu probably realized it before I did, though....
  270. 9: What do you mean....
  271. 8: You're soft-hearted. You'll do anything to help the people close to you, and will spoil the hell out of them. You're overprotective and a massive worrywart. (2)
  272. 8: And it's not just to Nanase. You're like this to the fans, to us, and to Kujo.
  273. 8: That's why you left your family for Nanase, you didn't tell Ryuu and I that "Let's☆SUMMER!" was a plagiarized song, and that's why you won't cut ties with Kujo-- because he took care of you.
  274. 8: You'd drink poison for the people you hold dear when they're suffering, without any hesitation at all. That's what's really under your cold-hearted hedgehog exterior.
  275. 9: .......
  276. 8: I only have one request. Don't drink poison for me, not when I'm right by your side. Just like how you can't bear it when the people closest to you are suffering, I can't bear it when <i>you're</i> suffering.
  277. 9: ....... I'm not suffering at all-- I'm happy. That's why....
  278. 8: What?
  279. 9: ...It's embarrassing to say this again, but.... I want to sing with you and Ryuu. Together.
  280. 9: That's what makes me the happiest.... So please don't worry about me. ...Thank you.
  281. 8: Tenn.
  282. 9: ...Yes?
  283. 8: That's not what I'm talking about.
  284. 9: You are so insensitive! I'm never saying it again!!
  285. 8: If you're the happiest when you're singing with us, why couldn't you say 'no' to Kujo when he told you to quit TRIGGER!?
  286. 9: That's--
  287. 8: See? That's what I was talking about! You <i>are</i> looking down on Kujo and pitying him-- Stop lying to yourself!
  288. 9: .......
  289. <br>*splash*
  290. 8: Argh-- What was that for!
  291. 9: Sorry, my hand slipped. I was just trying to refill your cup.
  292. 8: That's a goddamn lie! You twins and spilling shit on people's crotches...! (3)
  293. 9: You're so arrogant, it's the spitting image of your father!
  294. 8: What the fuck did you say?
  295.  
  296. [cg]
  297. 10: Heyy, you guys havin' fun? Wait-- What happened!? What are you guys fighting about-- Wait, no, don't do that!
  298. <br>**TRIGGER:** .......
  299. ane: After that, a <i>heavily</i> intoxicated Sougo-kun stumbled upon this fight and scolded you all. Would you like to watch the part where he makes you three kneel and repent?
  300. 10: Uh, no.... I think we're good.... But I see.... You guys were fighting over Kujo-san.
  301. 8: You're on my side, right, Ryuu?
  302. 9: Ryuu, you're on my side. Right?
  303. 10: Hmm....
  304. 10: I understand how Tenn feels since I also became and idol to help my family with money.
  305. 9: See?
  306. 8: What the hell, Ryuu!?
  307. 10: But Gaku's opinion also makes sense. I originally started for my family, but I don't think I could quit TRIGGER even if my family told me to.
  308. 9: .......
  309. 8: See? Heard that, Tenn?
  310. 9: Shut up.
  311. 10: I became an idol for my family because I wanted to, and my desire to stay in TRIGGER is also out of my own free will. But if those two ever start to clash....
  312. 10: I would have to talk to my family and make sure they understand what I'm doing so they respect my wishes.
  313. 10: Have you talked to Kujo-san about how you feel, Tenn? It wasn't really like you to skirt around the issue at hand with Kujo-san that one time.
  314. 9: I....
  315. ane: I'm not going to overlook this whole quitting TRIGGER nonsense. Did Kujo-san really say that to you?
  316. 9: .......
  317. ane: I'd be deeply troubled if you quit. With regards to that, I'm on Gaku's side.
  318. 9: ....... I have no intentions of quitting TRIGGER.
  319. 8: Then tell it to Kujo's face.
  320. 9: ...I can't.
  321. 10: Why not?
  322. 9: Kujo-san is.... Kujo-san is hurting. But he himself isn't aware of that.
  323. 9: He says he'll train an idol that'll surpass Zero. He says that, but he won't acknowledge any idol that does.
  324. 9: Even though he's so talented and accomplished, he's hurting, suffering, and lost.... I don't want to corner him any further.
  325. 8: Like I said, you're too sentimental! What are you, the auntie running a mom-and-pop shop? Resist the feeling. (4)
  326. 9: .......
  327. 8: What? Got something to say for yourself?
  328. 9: No, I just.... It's hard to come up with a response to being called an 'auntie'....
  329. 10: It's because you're good at taking care of other people, and really nice! I can picture you whipping up an <i>onigiri</i> as you give them sage advice....
  330. <br>*doorbell rings*
  331. 10: Oh, looks like someone's here? I'm going to go check the monitor.
  332. ane: Will you be okay? Be wary of reporters.
  333. 10: .......
  334. 9: What's wrong?
  335. 10: ...It's Kujo-san.
  336. kj: Hello, it's Kujo Takamasa. I'm at the main entrance on the first floor. I'm here to see Tenn.
  337. 9: ...!
  338.  
  339. <br>To be continued....
  340.  
  341. (1) Technically they only say each others' names here buuuuuuuuut I wanted it to be more obvious that they're going ":\\\\\" at each other!! SO
  342. (2) 身内びいき literally means nepotism but uhhhhhhhhh that deffo aint the connotation here.
  343. (3) Hi please refer to the First anniversary story where Riku is trying his actual goddamn best to refill Yamato/Gaku's cups and uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh spilling it on the front of their pants such that it resembles if a person had urinary incontinence issues.
  344. (4) SO I HAD TO MODIFY THINGS BECAUSE GAKU USES AN ANALOGY I COULDNT GET 100% PERFECT AND HAD TO TAKE SOME CREATIVE LIBERTIES WITH. Shitamachi refers to the traditional shopping, entertainment, and residential districts of Tokyo, and okami-san refers to the landlady/female owner of an establishment.
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