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  1. I didn't know you were one of the first people to use this combination, but that said I'm impressed that you've kept this look for so long. More than year for a look, that's some dedication.
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  3. I"ll ask that you don't misinterpret my comments and how I'm rating this as making up my mind because I'm ultimately judging your look based on the criteria set out, both by this website and the GW Dye Job subreddit. This website uses sliders based on armor mix, dye choices, originality, screenshots and description to rate a look. In addition, the Legendary contest you submitted this to will judge your look based on your armor and how well it reflects your legendary. They don't specify a contestant to submit a legendary with their look, merely a look inspired by or showcasing an ensemble fitting to a legendary.
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  5. To start, I'll begin with your armor mix. I'm not saying you should feel compelled to change your look because so many others have used it, but since your are posting to a contest judging your armor, and a website that uses originality as a form of rating, my review will be influenced by those standards. Although, I think something that could help with the originality in your look is by spicing up your dye colors.
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  7. You're right in that a lot of styles can look really good with only two colors, unfortunately I don't think this is one those cases. With the exception of your shoulders, your armor pieces have at least three dye slots each, which offers a lot of variety in shading and detailing your armor. I'm disappointing in your choices in that I would've expected your armor dyes to reflect Sunrise some more. It's a vibrant and colorful great sword, aspects that I don't feel are reflected in your colors.
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  9. I can understand it's hard to integrate pastel colors into a look--given how subtle their hue can be--especially if its a look with a lot of metal. But it wasn't recommended you add more color to the metallic parts of your armor but instead the cloth parts of your shoulder-piece and pants. More color doesn't have to be introduced throughout the entirety of the armor set nor should it feel forced to. But just a splash of color--even multiple different shades of white and/or gold--can change the depth and appeal of your combination.
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  11. However, I think a larger issue in your looks is your screenshots. They exacerbate your dye problem by washing out the details. I agree with morriganiontko in that I think your armor would be better showcased using a sky background, which would be more fitting as well, and While I can see that it would obscure some of the effects of your legendary, my critique here lies more in how your armor looks and less in how well your legendary is shown.
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