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- Nonspell 1:
- You should make the white knives slower. Also, make gaps in between them so that you can re-stream them. Going around and around the boss is NEVER a good idea for a nonspell.
- You MIGHT also want to consider making the arrowheads take less time to move outwards... I don't like to have them just sit around on the screen. When they turn purple they are also way too fast.
- Spell 1:
- I don't even know how to dodge this.
- At first glance, it seems like you have to move around the boss but apparently the waves collapse into each other, so the player gets walled off...
- I'd like to be able to squeeze through the white arrowheads, so make them slower and lower their angular velocity.
- Nonspell 2:
- See Spell 1. Again, you look like you have to move around the boss, but then the player gets scrunched up by the rows.
- I'm getting real sick and tired of Akyuu and rainbows here, when she's mostly associated with history and therefore should have some monochromatic gimmicks.
- Spell 2:
- Looks like Luna Child's Moon Sign "Luna Cyclone".
- I'd rather you scrap this entirely rather than try to fix this, but...
- Don't have the walls cross over one another like that. Make the walls spiral one way, then in another wave, the other way.
- Nonspell 3:
- How about... no. There is NO WAY you can squeeze through those, even with a slow character.
- Have this pattern revolve around the boss or something instead of forming a wall from top to bottom.
- PLEASE.
- Spell 3:
- RANDOMLY-PLACED BULLETS THAT FALL AT THE EXACT SAME SPEED THEN BOUNCE BACK!!
- YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
- No.
- Nonspell 4:
- Got killed by a white snow bullet spawning right on top of my player.
- Again, REALLY impossible, and way too simple.
- There REALLY isn't much you can do with this.
- Please scrap this and make something new.
- Spell 4:
- Seriously... That opening...??
- WHY???
- TELL ME WHY.
- After that it turns into CAVE-like random crap. Which is also bad...
- Are you trying and failing to be Guse Flash?
- Spell 5:
- I KEEP ALMOST GETTING CLIPPED BY THE CIRCLES SPAWNING.
- THIS IS A BIG NO.
- Also, dissolving into random crap is BAD.
- Darkness1 has a hell of a time getting that through his head, as he keeps LIKING SCRIPTS THAT HAVE AN AFFINITY FOR RANDOM SPAM.
- At least make it break up into a spiral or something.......
- Death effect:
- Lasts too long. That is all.
- Last word:
- ACTUALLY, This is a decent spell.
- Have some aimed bullets coming from somewhere to keep the player moving even between phases.
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