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Kya...

Iori...?
What's wrong... you can't stand!?
Yeah... Seems like I twisted my left legs...
[Legs should be leg, or perhaps ankle if it suits the situation better]

Ouch...

Ah... this is definitely a sprain
You can't work for a while with this
[*Would read better phrased "You won't be able to work for a while with your leg like that"
N...

No way! This is fine... I can keep going
[*"This is fine" would read better "I am fine"]
You're crying

Anyway lets see the hospital first...
[Should either read "go to the hospital" Or "see a doctor"]
There

Ah...

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Wah- Wah- This is the famous...
I see.. that's right...
I see.. that's right...
Being injured might not be so bad...

You'll have to rest for at least a week...

I guess we'll have to cancel our work
[*If by work you mean jobs this sounds a bit strange. would be better put "We'll have to take a break from work" or something like that.]

Um... If it's something I can still do like radio recording then I want to do it...
[*It's OK as is, but may read better put like "If there's something I can still do, like a recording, then I want to do it...]
Hm... but
If you push yourself it might get worse

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I said I'm going to work, are you against it?
I didn't say that...
So you'll have to be my legs!

If you do that I'll step on you with my other leg
Ah... Right
Thank... you

Next Day

Alright, that's good
Thank you for your work(music note)
Come here, Producer

Ok
Don't just stand there


Hey, Iori, did you work because you want me to carry you?
[*Again saying work sounds a smidgen akward it might be better put "Are you doing this because you want me to carry you?"
Don't be so self-conscious
It's not like I enjoy being held by you, stupid...

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Ah... hold on

What is it? There's no more work today
I know that... but... you know...
No, I don't

I want to go to the restroom! ...geez...
Ah, I see, to the restroom

It's the women's restroom... a-are you coming in too?
It can't be helped

Or would you prefer the men's restroom?
No way! It's stink and it's dirty....
["It's stink", should be "It stinks"]
It's not that bad

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Hey... get out
Don't mind me

Just let it out
You... pervert! There's no way I could do that!!

Eh? You can show me your peeing, can't you?
[*Show me your peeing sounds a bit weird to me may be better phrased "Show me how you pee" or something like that.]
I don't want to show you! Don't say that so casually!

If you struggle so much it'll affect your injurty
["injurty" is mispelled it should read "injury"]
Kgh... you...

Did someone came in...
["Came" should read "come" as in "Did someone come in..."]
I have to hurry or they'll be suspicious...
...tsh

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If he keep licking... someone's... going to hear me
["Keep" should read "keeps" or maybe even "keeps on" as in "if he keeps (on) licking"]

Nn

Uwah...

Hah
Ha

That's a lot... were you holding it in during recording?
[*This is OK, but it might sound better to put it "Were you holding it in this whole time?]
Someone might have heard that

A...aslong no one know it was me

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Hah...
I...it's over already!

You idiot...
Don't get so arouse here...
["Arouse" should read "aroused", or perhaps "excited".]

It was because I was carrying you the entire time
["It was" doesn't seem the proper tense, I believe it should be "It is" or "It's]

And there's less work so we have more free time
[*It might read a bit better to say "And there's less work to do"]

So you're doing something like this...
Nn

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Nm...
Nn
I wanted to hurry home and take a shower...
I can smell this idiot's penis in my mouth...
[*Smelling and mouth don't really go together well, maybe phrase this "This idiot's penis smell is getting stuck in my mouth] that's likely a bit too far from the actual text, but just a thought]

Could you stop cumming on my face and clothes?
[*Might read better "Could you please stop"]
Then I have to cum in your mouth, is that fine?
I don't want that either...

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Then I'll have to put it in your lower mouth

Who would want that...
Mnn
But you've been touching yourself for a while now

Ah geez... it's this wet already...
I can't stop... it's his fault I'm like this

Ah... I'm going to cum like this alright

Just think of it as medicine

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That... damn idiot... why is it always like this...
[Ought to have a question mark at the end]

Don't get mad because you couldn't came first
["Came" should be "cum"

Pervert
Damn pervert
Sorry
And give me back my panty
["Panty" should be "Panties"]
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Ten days later

Alright, that's it
Okay- next pose...

Right, that's it for today. Thank you for your work, Iori-chan. Take care of your leg
[*"Thank you for your work" might read better as "Thank you for your hard work"]
It actually healed already...

Good work, Producer

I feel bad for lying but
It feels good so just three days or so more...
[*This might read better as "this feels really good" or "This just feels so good", also "three days or so more" might better read " for just a few more days" 3 is a bit specific and sounds a bit strange to me]

By the way, Iori, we have no plan after this
["plan" should read "plans"]
I suppose
And you're already healed so could we do it like this
[Should have a question mark at the end of this line]
Sure
Hah?

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Hold on... stop joking...

Well your leg is healed, isn't it
[Ought to have a question mark at the end]
No... it's not... what are you saying...

If we do lewd things and it get worse it'll be your...
I can do it while carrying you
S-so you just want to do it, don't you...

If it's not healed then I'll do what I can...

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Ah, I can't...

We've been using nothing but hands...

If this idiot's penis is going inside me...
Fine... come here...
You want to put it in, don't you... Iori-chan's...

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You're more spoiled than usual today...

You really enjoyed... being carried around...
Th...
That's not true... I'm not spoilt...

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Ohh
It's squeezing me
No... don't... not that deep...
Uwoh...

Oh... have you came? Well its been a while
["came" should be "cum"]
Wasthat too much...?
["Wasthat" should be "Was that"]

That's nothing... I can keep going...
[*"That's nothing" might read better as "This is nothing"]
What you said and how you look is completely different...

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Ugh
Your womb... it's sucking my penis in...
Looks like you really want this... your ass is twiching too...

S...shut up... You want to... cum in my pussy...
too... don't you....
Oh no don't rush...

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D... don't show me the mirror...
Don't say that
Being tied up together is proof of our love...

Hah
Love... you stupid pervert
I'm going to die
I... won't...
horgifve yuuu

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Ug...oh
You're so cute... Iori...
Haa
It's cumming
[Unless she is refering to his penis, this ought to read "It's coming"]
Stupid stupid stupid haaaaaaah

You're... the worst...

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How did you know I was healed...
[Ought to have a question mark at the end]
I thought I hid it pretty well
Hm, I just do
What's with that, I'm going to be angry...

Are you saying that I'm bad at acting?
No that's not it...
Hmph... well that's fine

By the way... if you continue to carry me... I'll forgive you if
you do lewd things to me, okay...?

Then... will you forgive me with this, Princess?
Yeah...

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Hey, Iori...
Are you tired? You got no endurance do you
["You got" would be more correct if it read "You have" As in "You have no endurance do you?"]
It's not that...
I just think that you've been getting heavier lately...
I'll walk by myself