Maris Stella ch. 4 TL script

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Beyond desiring for Rakija Maris Stellas' bismuth (ore)    There isn't anything behind grasping for the former worlds' information hidden within the holy land

The prophecy hinted as far as the arrival of ocean creature chimera and angels at last. Completing the decoding of the information transmigration of ocean and land is only a mater of time
Then why is Ambrose aiming for gradual possession over the holy lands' information?

He might be an ambitious person, but he's not a brazen human. He understands that now's the time for joint struggle
So it's not like he desires for mutual destruction
Both bringing back and continuing the original world are now in a purgatory beyond one's control. Anyhow, the fate of mankind lies with the 6th company now......
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Plateau region Zebeltoy

Chapter 4 [Hope]
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*Blow*

*Grrrrrr*

How convenient... Well, let's start preparations

Administer the ampoule!
Start up the kether!
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Yes! Miss Brigitte

Geez~ Please don't tease me like that
Miss is just for miss Rakija
*Smile smile*
Person that put everybody up to
*Excited shudder*
Reaction just as hoped

Start-up complete

I think you know it, but today's opponents are drifting type ocean creatures, so you can be assured that they won't come and attack us
Yes
Yes
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Accuracy is the main point in this operation as the rainfalls' range is extremely limited. Pay also attention to the amount of rain.
I will now pass over the map and coordinates, so please confirm them

*Glow*
*Glow*
*Touch*

*Glow*
*Tip*

Extend your kether, else it can't enter
Hora, open up
Sorry
I I'm nervous

Don't fret around, shove it into
How's that!? How about I thrust it into your mouth if this doesn't work
Ah ah, it went in!! Coordinates are confirmed

Take hold of the ascending mountain face while circling it
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We're not sticking to it. The ocean is rougher than expected. What should we do? First lieutenant

Hiyahho-
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First javelin get!!

Well done, right inside this turbulence
But the shooting is not accurate enough

Die
Ymir!! Match the coordinates
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How pretty...

Vacant/spellbound
This is the crystallization of water, and it was called snow in the former world!! Since it melts away fast, only angels can see such scenery!!
Vacant/spellbound

Mikio, it's our turn
Let's go

Y yes

This is way too easy and boring, I want to do a mopping up battle or something instead!! Let me lead a company and I'll eradicate those ocean creatures
Yeah sure/as if, I'll give the command over to you
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[Matter of change]. [Projection]. [Empty dream]. As I thought, you'll die early

And with that the surprise attacks are at a draw!! Wanna go for a conclusion!?
Fight me once we've
Descended back to the ground!!

*Pft*
You'll regret this, be glad if you only pay off with one of your limbs!!

*Smack pow*
Operation complete, good work
Shouldn't we stop them?
Let them go at it till they're satisfied
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Sixth company lodging

They were eaten by the ocean...

*Smack*
Both my legs withered off!! I'll get my revenge!! I'll definitely become the strongest angel, command a company and drive off the ocean!! Until that    I won't die

Try to remember it Juri, she was that kid Rakija carried who was on the verge of dead since she had half of her body eaten by an ocean creature
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I can sympathize with what's in your mind Ymir, but please understand. You reservists are here to replace somebody you don't know, but were important to us.  You're here because they died.
*The Silmarillion*

There was
Alauda
And over there was    Blanc

Those seats were their places

Blanc was Chocolans' younger sister and a physically strong and reliable gunner

She wasn't intimated by fear facing no mater what enemy, and her shape
Brought courage to her allies

Alauda was Juris' contemporary and close friend... A chatterbox and frivolous grenadier
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And after an operation, she'd always have a smoke, exactly like that
*Drip*
You resemble her in some curious places-

And exactly this irritates you, no?   Juri

Geez...   That's not true. Since she didn't pack a punch like this, and also didn't knew how to ride turbulences like today
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Corporal Chocolan, what are our/the 6th company's home rules concerning the procedure after a quarrel?
*Cough*
French/deep kiss
Why such a nonsense method without pardon, and an instant answer on top of that
You really like mischief

Y you only just came up with this home rule, didn't you!! Like hell I'll do that!!
I won't offer up Ymirs' saliva, so do it with me instead!!

What?
Let's do it

Are you not  content with me, ma'am private first-class Juri!! Wait so this means that you like Ymir, no!?   (no idea how the rank/name order goes if you ad an additional sir/ma'am to it)
And how comes that all of a sudden!!
I know!! You bully her because you like her!! It's a love flag!!  (the dating sim kind of flag I guess)
You're a degenerate
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All members, attention!!

That's an awfully serious/bad face our colonel got there

The pope declared a crusade
We, the 6th company are to lead the recruit corps and retake the holy land

Cru
Sade

The recruits?

Holy land

Retake
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Warrant officer Korn, the crusade badges are inside here. Supervise sewing them onto the designated places until tomorrow morning

Yes

That's all...

Disperse
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Many will die on this expedition
Aah, yeah
So you are to die fighting under my command after all

Hora...... I can already hear it
Save me!!
I don't wanna die!!
You'll shout this while wreathing and spitting blood

Rakija... You

Yet still I'll give orders
Rakija it's fine/cut it out

Advance.     Advance advance
Stop it!!
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No way... This can't
*Tremble*
College of cardinals meeting
Minutes/record of proceedings

*Creeeeak*
I wonder if they mention/credit your name too in the credits roll of this disgusting skit within the minutes?

*Slam*
Warrant officer Korn, spy from the 10th company

You're wrong/No!! I'm not a spy!!

I'd prefer if you don't underestimate the elven information network, as we are the only noble class amongst demi-humans!!
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Now may I ask you a question, I wonder how the 10th angel company’s' viceroy cardinal Ambrose knew of miss Rakijas' angel disease, something even I wasn't aware of?

Because he heard it from you, isn't that so

You're wrong/no!! I didn't tell father about the angel disease!!
It's because that medicine was confidentially provided by somebody with connections to fathers private research institute!! Besides... Besides
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There's no way father would send me to the holy land, isn't there

Father, with father you mean...    That you're cardinal Ambrose's illegitimate daughter?
Sure you should say that?

And there you went and just blurted it out...... How anticlimactic.    I wonder if this is what a spy is made of

Please believe me first lieutenant Brigitte, I'm not a spy
If that's so, you'll have to prove it/yourself
On this nasty battlefield that's about to start
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*Sewing noise*
Crusade
6th angel company

I'm scared, but
As long as I'm with Ymir
I'll be fine no mater were

*Cling*
Let's go together Blanc. Give me strength

*Slam*
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Wai wai wai

We'll raise our flag in the holy land
Yeah
Oh-
Rauls recruit corps
Hurray/banzai
Hurray
Hurray

Ymir-senpai. let's clear out those bastards
Of course
*Crusa(de)*
Ymir-senpai
Senpai
Are you girls doing well
Mikio, you grew bigger/taller again
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Can you believe those kids,     they trust into both us
*Crusade*
And the great cause of war so much that it hurts
No mater which age/times,    people are moved rather by assumption than righteousness

Sorry about yesterday, I put on a shameful sight (SHAMEFUR DISPRAY)
Not like it changes something about our relationship. If you want to apologise, then do it about your secrets

Yeah, you're right...

First lieutenant, look
Eh
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Wa-
Wa-

You're (one of the girls) from sometime back... You didn't graduate?

I had to remain another year since I'm the commanding officer of the recruit corps ma'am first lieutenant Brigitte

Wa-
It's an honour to fight alongside you
Wa-
Wa-

What's wrong, did you miss your ride or something
It's dazzling over there...

That's because you're watching from offset. If you get/join in, you'll all be the same
*Pat*
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Come on, let's go
Miss Rakija... I...

Hoist the battle flag!!
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*Western paradise* (4 letters on flag)
Oooooooooh
Soon it shall arrive.    The time were we have to grieve/lament those children’s deaths

Choosing not to let them to despair
This will certainly give birth/lead to a result I wonder how unbearable-
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The ancient times. In the age called A.D.
Mankind met their doomsday

Afterwards. Until now, doomsday isn't accomplished
Our earth/world
Is riddled with imperfections and absurdity. So we continue with this misshapen/distorted temporary life/residence.
Isn't it incredible/unimaginable how this repose/quiet place hasn't come from the strength of us angels  (not sure here, too many negations and shit)

Isn't the prayer of people enough
*Rakija*
Isn't it because of both parties.   Those questions troubled me for a long time

But today I found my answer only because I face you ladies
You ladies who's eyes/pupils aren't faltering/hesitating
So I found this answer
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It's the prayer to believe in the strength within your mind/heart/desire!!   (想い is a rather broad word that can be translated to pretty much everything 'mind' related. It's used again it the last bubble on the next page)
*Takeo*

In yourself!! Your friends!! Men/people!! The Lord/god!!
In Victory!!

Unyielding full power/strength and mind

Believe!!
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The time has come
We, the latest angels are the angels of salvation!!

To become the ones to accomplish doomsday
Demand/seek the holy land!! Crave it with all your mind!!   Divide the ocean and form a path with your mind/heart, let it become the key to open up the closed holy land
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Fill your sails with the wind of hope!!

And steer towards( lit. set your rudder/helm for) the ocean of dead!!
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12.08.1042 Marked calendar

The true crusade expeditionary force, consisting of 8 6th angel corps members and 40 Rauls recruit corps members, went southwards alongside the line defending the eastern gulf/bay coast area

Departing to the Baranus outpost base, the southernmost ridge/summit of hope from Cathedral

The holy land lies further westwards from there

[Maris Stella of doomsday] continued in volume 2
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The characters  (I like how my e-dictionary also has dramatis personae as TL)
6th angel corps

Rakija Maris Stella (left)
Angel who holds the title of Maris Stella. Her hobby is gathering hats
Thalys (right)
Big/older sister figure with a sweet tooth

Brigitte (right)
Noble from a rare kind of demi-humans. Neat freak/fastidious
Korn (left)
Very earnest. Hobby is admiring stones/jewels

Alauda (left)
Noisy blabbermouth. Smokes are Lucky Strike
Juri (right)
Quiet and composed. Systema champion (it just says strongest tough)

Blanc (top) younger twin
Confident in her brute/arm strength. Skilled at baseball
Chocolan (below) older twin
Nonchalantly chews (chewing) gum that has already lost its flavour

(the group that first did ch. 1 with magazine raws has a coloured ver. of this page)
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3rd angel company
-3rd angel company-
Has corps spread across the great desert. Securing resources is their duty. Motto is [Let's go for a hunt]

-1st angel company-
Guarding the valley of death. The deep valley becomes a big waterfall after it gets gulped down by the flowing tide. Often cooperates with the 3rd company.

6th angel company
-6th angel company-
In charge of the defence line's eastern part. An area of ocean with many hard to pass places if the tide flows in from the open sea. They also look after brackish waters, lagoons and such.

-Rauls recruit corps-
The only angel school, also Ymir and Mikio's alma mater. In order to lower the ages of angels, elementary, middle and high school/grades were turned into an integrated school system.

-10th angel company-
Protecting the capitol's anti-tide forest. Separated from the open sea thanks to the Zebull mountains.

Country restoration corps
9th angel company
-9th angel company-
In charge of the defence line's southern part. Team that excelled in open sea activities. Contact was lost while they headed for the holy land.

Crusade
Stuff/thing angels aren't grateful for and don't want to attach.

-Airborne troops insignia-
Attached to the beret

Badge/proof that bismuth was gained after intercourse with a cherub.
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Given up/excepted rough sketch of the 10 main characters from the early planning days. Blanc and Alauda are together with Ymir and Mikio. I also thought about such development. As the author, seeing such a picture is painful.
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Rough sketch from the battlefield. I imagined them as airborne troops. They can pull out and retract their wings. Since it's SF, this is by no way magic. (lol)
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Tide  潮
Valley of death  死の谷
Great desert (inland sea)  大砂漠 (内海)
Zebeltoy  ゼベルトイ
6th company base  第六団基地
Spouses rock  めおと岩 (Easy to miss. Right next to the lake below the base)
Capital city  首都
Zebull mountains  ゼブル山脈
Tide  潮
Baranus  バラナス
Great lighthouse  大灯台
Open sea (ocean of clouds)  外洋 (雲海)
Cathedral. Complete map of outskirts  カテドラル 周辺全図
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