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rosalinda316

_AxelPvP_ plot deny

Jun 1st, 2015
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  1. Hello my name is rosalinda316 and I'll be reviewing your plot today. I'll focus on three things: Terrain, structure, and organics.
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  3. Terrain: Your terrain looks better although it's still a bit similar overall. Maybe a few quartz ore blocks would help? Also try working on your floating islands. Make them different sizes and shapes. Also consider making another one higher up from the others so your path can spiral up instead of just drifting down.
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  5. Structure, your tower looks better, especially with what sarazon helped you with. Try continuing that to the other floating tower too. Try also using other blocks to add more color but still match the overall theme (think iron bars, coal/obsidian blocks, maybe even quartz stairs/blocks). Beware, quartz is a very bright block so it may backfire on your dark plot. You might even consider adding towers to each of the floating islands and connecting them together. Try using different materials on your paths or breaking them apart partially to make them more interesting to look at.
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  7. Organics: I like the glowstone leaves (although I liked your dark oak trunks better mostly because soulsand is used in the ground)
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  9. Overall: Keep working on your plot and good luck on your next submission!
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