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Unaware trait swap

Mar 15th, 2023
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  1. Rewrite the segment with the following changes: Gunther keeps his remote and its fuctions a secret from john, he wants to use to experiment on him.
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  3. Both character will not mention magic, and john wont mention Syn or the truth of his predicament.
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  5. John cannot notice the effects of his traits being swapped.
  6. As John, now in Riri's body, hesitantly navigated the party, he felt completely out of place. The room was filled with people wearing extravagant costumes and laughing as they experienced inexplicable transformations. John felt a sudden urge to find someone who might be able to help him understand this strange world.
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  8. As he walked through the crowd, he spotted Gunther, a nerdy and eccentric loner, standing in the corner. Hoping to find an ally, John approached him.
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  10. John: "Hey there, I'm Riri. This place is kind of crazy, huh? You seem like someone who might know a thing or two about what's going on."
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  12. Gunther: "Ah, hello! I'm Gunther. Yes, I've been to a few of these parties. They can be quite... unpredictable, to say the least."
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  14. John: "I'm just trying to figure out how to fit in here. Any tips or tricks to navigating this place?"
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  16. Gunther: "Well, I might be able to offer some guidance. Let's just say I have a knack for understanding the peculiarities of these events."
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  18. As they talked, Gunther discreetly pulled out a magical remote from his pocket, pointing it at John and pressing a button.
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  20. Gunther: "So, tell me more about yourself. What brings you to a party like this?"
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  22. John: "Well, dude, I'm just here for a good time, you know? Like, it's wild and all, but I'm still trying to find my groove."
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  24. Gunther raised an eyebrow at John's speech but said nothing. He pressed another button on the remote, and John's eyes glazed over for a moment.
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  26. John: "By Jove, it's absolutely preposterous! You see, my family, the Harringtons, are quite prominent in the community, but I never expected to find myself in such a bizarre predicament."
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  28. Gunther: "Fascinating! The Harringtons, you say? I had no idea you were from such a prestigious family."
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  30. John continued speaking, unaware of the change in his speech and the mention of the Harringtons.
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  32. John: "Yes, it's quite a responsibility, being part of such a lineage. But I must admit, this party is quite the thrilling experience!"
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  34. Gunther grinned mischievously as he hid the remote behind his back.
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  36. Gunther: "Indeed, it is quite the spectacle. I find these events to be the perfect opportunity for a little... experimentation, if you will."
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  38. John, oblivious to Gunther's intentions, nodded in agreement.
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  40. John: "Certainly! It's not every day you get to experience something like this. I'm glad I came, even if it's a bit overwhelming at times."
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  42. Gunther: "Well, my dear friend, I think you'll find that the more you embrace the unexpected, the more enjoyable these parties become."
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  44. As Gunther raised the remote once again, John took a deep breath, completely unaware of the changes that were about to take place.
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  47. In the next segment, john and gunther explore and talk about the party, while gunther keeps secretly using the remote on hims.
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  49. Add a naration section at the start about how different john is due to the swapping of the traits, compared to his normal traits.
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  51. Remember that john speech pattern was changed.
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  53. The next traits of john's that will be swapped will be: School club,Height, hair, Libido.
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  55. Keep the story moving primarily through their dialogue, but include sections that detail how the swapped traits change john.
  56. As John and Gunther walked through the party, they marveled at the strange sights and sounds around them. Unbeknownst to John, Gunther continued to secretly use the remote on him, eager to see the effects of swapping various traits.
  57. John, now with the eloquent speech pattern and family history of a Harrington, felt quite different from his usual self. He was an average high school student who preferred a laid-back lifestyle and had never been part of such an exclusive gathering. Little did he know that his current demeanor was just the beginning of the alterations Gunther had in store for him.
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  59. John: "Gunther, my good man, this party is unlike anything I have ever experienced. The sheer energy and excitement is quite palpable!"
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  61. Gunther: "Indeed, Riri, it's a veritable wonderland of the bizarre and extraordinary. One could spend hours observing the fascinating occurrences here."
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  63. As they continued to explore the party, Gunther subtly used the remote again, swapping John's school club involvement with that of another partygoer.
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  65. John: "I must say, being part of the Astronomy Club has truly broadened my horizons. Stargazing and identifying celestial bodies is such a thrilling pastime."
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  67. Gunther, feigning interest, responded, "Oh, that sounds fascinating. Astronomy is quite an intriguing subject."
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  69. John, who had actually been part of the Skateboarding Club, remained blissfully unaware of the change. Meanwhile, Gunther covertly aimed the remote at John again, altering his height to match someone else's at the party. John suddenly found himself towering above Gunther.
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  71. John: "My, the perspective from up here is truly remarkable! I can see why taller individuals might enjoy such an advantage."
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  73. Gunther: "Ah, yes, it must be quite a unique vantage point. How does it feel to be so tall?"
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  75. John: "It's certainly a novel experience, but I must admit, it suits me quite well."
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  77. Next, Gunther used the remote to swap John's hair with that of another attendee. John's hair transformed from its natural brown color to a vibrant shade of purple.
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  79. John: "The diversity of styles and colors at this gathering is simply marvelous. I daresay my own hair has never looked so resplendent!"
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  81. Gunther: "It's quite a fetching look, Riri. This party certainly encourages bold self-expression."
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  83. As John reveled in his new appearance, Gunther furtively pressed another button on the remote. John's libido suddenly increased, and he became more aware of the attractive people around him.
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  85. John: "Gunther, I must say, the attendees of this soiree are positively stunning. The atmosphere is simply electrifying, wouldn't you agree?"
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  87. Gunther, smirking at the transformation, replied, "Yes, the allure of this event is undeniable. It seems you're really getting into the spirit of things, Riri."
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  89. As the night wore on, John continued to experience the effects of Gunther's remote, completely unaware of the cause. And as they wandered through the party, Gunther continued his secret experimentation, reveling in the power he wielded over John's ever-changing traits.
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  92. In the next segment, john and gunther explore and talk about the party, while gunther keeps secretly using the remote on hims.
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  94. Remember that john speech pattern and libido have changed.
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  96. Add a naration section at the start about how different john is due to the swapping of the traits, compared to his normal traits.
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  98. The next traits of john's that will be swapped will be: Submissions, Love interest.
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  100. Keep the story moving primarily through their dialogue, but include sections that detail how the swapped traits change john.
  101. As John walked alongside Gunther, he couldn't help but feel that something was off. He took a moment to monologue in his head, trying to make sense of the changes he'd experienced.
  102. John, now sporting a refined speech pattern, increased libido, and several other swapped traits, was vastly different from the average high school student he once was. As he reveled in the excitement of the party, he couldn't shake the feeling that something was amiss. However, he remained oblivious to Gunther's secretive manipulations with the magical remote.
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  104. John: "Gunther, my dear fellow, the extraordinary nature of this party has left me feeling quite invigorated. It's as if I am discovering new aspects of myself that I never knew existed!"
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  106. Gunther: "I'm glad you're embracing the experience, Riri. That's what these gatherings are all about, after all."
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  108. As they continued to explore the party, Gunther slyly used the remote once more, this time swapping John's submission tendencies with those of another guest.
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  110. John: "I must say, the art on display here is utterly exquisite. I'm quite inspired to create my own masterpiece and submit it for future events. It would be an honor to share my work with such esteemed company."
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  112. Gunther: "That's a wonderful idea, Riri. It's great to see you taking such initiative."
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  114. John, who had previously been hesitant to put himself in the spotlight, now felt a newfound confidence and desire to share his talents. Meanwhile, Gunther aimed the remote at John again, this time swapping his love interest with that of someone else at the party.
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  116. John: "Gunther, I must confess, I find myself quite enamored with that enchanting individual over there." He gestured to a captivating figure across the room, someone he had never seen before. "I cannot explain the sudden intensity of my affections, but I am compelled to express my feelings."
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  118. Gunther, barely containing his amusement, replied, "Well, Riri, there's no time like the present. Why not seize the opportunity and introduce yourself?"
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  120. As John made his way across the room, he felt a mixture of excitement and confusion. He couldn't quite comprehend the sudden shift in his affections, but the allure was undeniable. With every step, the enchanting figure drew him in, like a moth to a flame.
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  122. All the while, Gunther watched from a distance, reveling in the chaos he had created. As he continued to manipulate John's traits with the magical remote, he couldn't help but feel a sense of power and control over the unsuspecting young man. The night was still young, and Gunther had many more experiments in mind for his newfound subject.
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