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CaptainLepidus

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Feb 29th, 2012
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  1. Problem. You wrote '"You are standing in the hallway of [...] what must be the main room below."' , but in another sentence '"You are in the main room of the In [...] and the bartender looks miserable."' : Inn Hallway seems to have two different descriptions, perhaps because you intended the second description to apply to something mentioned in between, but declared it in such a way that it was never the subject of an assertion. For instance, 'The Forest Clearing is northeast of the Woods.' makes the Forest Clearing the current room being discussed, but 'Northeast of the Woods is the Forest Clearing.' leaves the room under discussion unchanged, because the Forest Clearing is not the subject of the sentence.
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