CrescentGaming's Initiate Review

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Plot Review: CrescentGaming
Plot Reviewer: Jusserhead, Jr. Mod
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Hey there! Thanks for submitting your plot. Unfortunately, I'm going to have to deny it this time around, simply because you have not adequately shown all the necessary building techniques in order for me to see your skill. Octovon isn't your average creative server; we have high standards as to what we promote and what we want you to make. We require to see custom trees with unique shaping and a decent size, terrain that covers most of your plot with unique shaping and structures with depth and detailing. All of your plot must also have at least a loose theme to tie your builds together (medieval or fantasy theme recommended).

Currently your "structure" is a tree with mixed types of logs, which makes no sense. There aren't animals with multiple species at the same time, so why would trees have mixed "species" of tree? Also, we require having custom trees, the trees you have right now are made by saplings which we cannot allow. Finally, your terrain is completely flat except for one hill, which is oddly shaped and not structurally supported.

I recommend a restart, as cute as your gay pride dedication is. Try starting with a terrain that is more slanted, less symmetrical and more uniquely shaped. A good example for plots we're looking for are around spawn; there's plenty of example plots made. A tutorial for depth is at /plot visit Jusserhead 4.

If you need any help or have questions about your review, feel free to ask me, another staff member or any higher ranking player; we'd love to help! Though we won't build your plot for you, we can totally help you with your future and how you're going to continue in your plot.

Until next time,
Jusser - Octovon Jr. Mod