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FoodLovingPanda

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Apr 29th, 2015
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  1. Hi there
  2. My name is FoodLovingPanda and I will be reviewing you
  3. This review will be divided into three sections: Terrain, Organics and Structure and I will explain each section separately, so let us begin.
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  5. TERRAIN:
  6. Your terrain is really nice and i like it. You have used the snow in a very nice manner and that is commnedable.
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  8. ORGANICS:
  9. The trees you have on your plot are truly adorable. I love how they look realistic and i don't have to add anything else to this section.
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  11. STRUCTURE:
  12. Your structure is the only thing that is holding you back from ranking. The problem that i have with it is that your detailing is too messy, there is many details on the house you can no longer see the structure as it is. The detailing from the roof is completely connected to the one on the walls and even though you have some depth on the house it is lost by that. Try and redo your structure.
  13.  
  14. Have fun building
  15. -FoodLovingPanda
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