1st log:
>Rathke asking PC's name after him being flirty on first meeting: Isn't there a missing word?
"You tell me yours first so we can it a stop to that."
>Rathke telling PC her tamest story: There's a few missing words, I think.
>PC asks Rathke about the Horns: Typo:
I guess they're not very cretaive when it comes to naming >>thinsg<< over there, because they just >>namned<<
>Rathke rows the boat: Maybe add an option (maybe behind a check?) for PC to row the boat himself. And maybe Rathke thinks
PC is a bit too "chivalresque" about the whole deal, and rolls her eyes on the suggestion?
>Diving: Following someone you barely know into an underwatercave would be a bit scary. Maybe add a few questions for PC,
like "You can breathe underwater?" or "You're aware I won't last more than a minute or two, right?", or "How deep is it?
My species can suffer barotrauma" or something. Maybe before or after the dive would be a good place for a really corny
flirt option, like "Would you do mouth-to-mouth if I happened to drown?" or something.
>Music box fixing stuff: No option to opt out past a point. Would be a nice addition. You're both in an old, possibly
unstable cave with a worrying scraping sound, adding an option to back off at any point would be a good idea. Maybe behind
an int check?
>Rathke finding Rathrin: I didn't play through that part yet, but I can tell it's shady stuff. Maybe PC can assume it's of
"recreative" use?
>Encounter with scrapping monster: System error displaying that Stats.txt missing, apparently. Fight, stats (?) and
resists appears to be showing, and maybe working.
>"You're pretty good with that sword": Dialog crash.
>After clearing rubble: Dialog crash, can't get past it.

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2nd Rathke Bundle

>Mouth to mouth?: Typo: "Now, are you ready to go yet>"
>When discovering claw marks in the pool (Worried_trouble index?): Worried about a little trouble?: No dialog option
beyond that.

>After Miggles tries to rape you or something: Rathke's sprite either disappears, or appears offscreen. Her dialog bubbles
are translated to the right of the screen. Oddly enough "Narrator" bubbles (Black bubbles describing actions) stay in
place.
See for examples:
https://gyazo.com/df6847c7d2cf5bd322e28eb925226dd1
https://gyazo.com/3315bd85e800229be5efed706ed53e8d

>Finding the key in the desk: Only option is to lie to Rathke about not finding anything of interest while you pocketed
the key
https://gyazo.com/5a1b06fba7041d0a15ec70561eedd569

>Parting ways with Rathke after surfacing ends the encounter normally; However, trying to get to the next step through
debug menu throws you back to the crawler encounter.

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3rd attempt:

>During bath scene, after asking if she tried sauna: Missing capital letter: "not to mention that you can't use the soap I
splurged on in a sauna."

>Rathke's crude language: Shortly before the first sex scene, Rathke's tone shifts a bit, especially when it comes to
sexual organs. It feels like it contrasts a bit with the behavior she displayed until then. But I guess you could easily
put that on the fact she's spending a lot of time with sailors. That's something you could use to turn it to your
advantage. Maybe PC noticing the shift in tone, and Rathke explaining that spending your time with sailors can impact your
vocabulary during tension moments, Which would imply she's kinda tense about the situation she and PC is despite her
apparent assurance, and that would add a lot to her character, I think.

>Surprise pseudopeen: I think PC being a bit surprised by Rathke's anatomy, even if he picked the "Uh, what is that?"
option would seem fair. I mean, you don't see that everyday, and knowing what a pseudopenis is at all isn't really common.
Maybe an option to question Rathke after she shows it would add to credibility? Rathke simply answering something like
"Let's not kill the mood with questions, just dig in" or something like that would put an end to PC's interrogation (Maybe
an option to question further about it later would be nice?), but I think it would be a nice detail to add.

>Frenchkissing: Goodness gracious, this is neat, but I'd rather see Rathke finding her way towards PC's mouth than warning
him beforehand. If you're looking for consent, something like "You don't mind kissing?" or, if you want Rathke to be more
passive-agressive about it, "Are we just fucking, or making love?" or something like that, with the difference between the
two being kissing.
If you're just willing to make it feel natural, maybe have her nuzzle PC shortly before licking PC's cheek and/or lips,
and then PC can decide to open his mouth or not.  PC taking the initiative and pleasantly surprise her could be an option
too, but would take a bit the femdom aspect away, I guess.