0:00:24.65 and 0:00:26.73 flashing text, make the lines continuous
0:01:50.86 this line is waaaaaaaay to long, i'd make it something like [With just one run, we'll win!]
0:04:33.92 another line that's absolutely impossible to read. my suggestion [By substracting rotation with a knuckleball,\Nsimilar to a soccerball...] and that's still almost too long, but what can you do
0:04:42.80 chalk is wrong for me because this script has &H414C1F& still, just writing it down so you don't forget to change it
0:04:43.94 [There's a high probability\Nfor it to look like a shoal of fish.]
0:06:30.55 is this right with the dots inside the quotes? i legit don't know, english is hard
0:10:43.75 'that' instead of 'is.' the latter sounds like she would be telling someone about it who wasn't actually there
0:12:04.99 [T- This is...]
0:12:04.99 [match point], also on the sign of the case
0:14:18.10 high school
0:23:17.51 either [That's not necessary.] or [That won't be necessary.]
0:26:13.56 capitalize if
0:27:14.99 [It's obvious.] to make it clear that he's referring to the answer being simple/easy, rather than the actual process of creating the pitch
0:27:59.92 'due' instead of 'thanks'